Comment swap, here. I really like your summary. It got me really interested in what this story would be like. The first chapter was excellent. I love that Adrienne is already such a three dimensional character. I also like the fact that the layout goes along with the title, however I found it very, very difficult to concentrate on the writing because I got a migraine halfway through. Other than that, this was amazing!
August 31st, 2012 at 11:23pm