. December 15th, 2009 at 01:34pm
. Pull Me In The Undertow. - Comments
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Hey, I am one of the judges!
For creativity, out of five, I give you a four. A four is given because, of course there weren't too many twists once the first chapter was over with.
(Congratulations to the person who managed to come up with the spork inflicted leg wound!! I really loved that!!)
The grammar was good, so a 5 out of 5 for that.
The organisation was good, all up to the last chapter. The last chapter I found confusing and a little over the place. I have to mark you down for that, so a 3 out of 5.
Content Knowledge: it was good, so a 5.
All together, you have earned your team 17/20!
Goodluck!!December 15th, 2009 at 05:02am -
Definitely like where this is going!December 4th, 2009 at 02:07am
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LOVED IT. :D
I love how you listed every boat and every type of water. That made me laugh.
Amazing job.December 2nd, 2009 at 04:22am
