This was gorgeous. You have a lovely way with words. I don't quite understand the significance of the sea in this; it seems to be of a great relevance though (although that may be me just misinterpreting it). I like the almost drabble-y nature of the story, and I like the metaphors woven in through it.
I loved the layout; the colors really caught my eye. It's a silly thing, really, but it's just something I noticed. You did a lovely job with this, and I hope you continue writing it. It's very different from a lot of stories I've read about eating disorders on this site. I'm subscribing, and I'd love to hear more.
I loved the layout; the colors really caught my eye. It's a silly thing, really, but it's just something I noticed. You did a lovely job with this, and I hope you continue writing it. It's very different from a lot of stories I've read about eating disorders on this site. I'm subscribing, and I'd love to hear more.