Red Ink, White Feather - Comments

Uhm...whellll.
I squeed when I saw the Ezio Auditore da Firenze part. I am not obsessed.
And I can imagine Gerard as an Assassin. Can I imagine him as a good Assassin? Maybe not.
But, I wish you would continue this. AC and MCR....My kind of combo. *nod*

^ Oh, man. I killed it.

[size]This seems strangely familliar.

Bob makes me laugh. Don't you know it's not normal to randomly show up outside people's windows in the middle of the night, you silly ninja? I wonder how Gerard's going to handle all the stuff you're about to throw at him- besides poorly, I mean.

Well, I still stand by the fact that you are completely amazing. I know you'd like concrit, but nothing really comes to mind, and I've reread both chapters twice. It's really exciting to read, and really emotional at the end there. I liked where it's going so far.