January 10th, 2010 at 07:44am
That was so beautiful. You have such a way with words: a mezmerizing, captivating gift to mold them and shape them into such an entrancing piece as this one. I always knew you were an amazing writer, but this... this was just so beautiful, hard to find words to describe it, really.
The way you described their undying love for each other throughout the entire piece was so genuinely sincere, so well planned, so much love from you. They were so perfect for each other, so in love. And you painted their picture so well: their lives, and their feelings, and their perfect thoughts and actions. It was nothing short of genius.
They were so tender with each other, so madly in love. But it was a sweet kind of love, not like in the movies. This was so real. The use of adjectives, and pulling from their culture was done so precisely and professionally. You should be so proud of this, of yourself, of them. It was breathtaking.
The boys' love was just so tender and pure and true, and the contrast with the snow... Their mixing with something as pure as their love was completely and totally captivating.
Gah, I just adored it from beginning to end.