Caged With Barb Wired Hearts - Comments

  • JickNonas

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    Well comment swap brought me here, I'm not really sure who this people are, maybe you should put more in your summary to explain more what the story is about and who exactly these characters are. But overall, I think you wrote a very good story and it was well written and I think you did a good job! Nice work. Are you going to write more?
    June 7th, 2012 at 09:02am
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    Well comment swap brought me here, I'm not really sure who this people are, maybe you should put more in your summary to explain more what the story is about and who exactly these characters are. But overall, I think you wrote a very good story and it was well written and I think you did a good job! Nice work. Are you going to write more?
    June 7th, 2012 at 09:02am
  • Number0005

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    I just found this story two days ago... I just now finished it. It. Was. Amazing.

    When I read:
    "No one made it out alive," He whispers. My eyes widen.
    "No one?" I question. He shakes his head.
    "We're the only ones left."
    I literally yelled "Now they're gonna have to repopulate the Earth!"
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:03am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Aw I absolutely loved the ending! Like it was perfect for the story! Are you going to write more perhaps? You're awesome :)
    December 31st, 2010 at 03:15pm
  • Lithium Lullabies

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    I just read this- and it was amazing. i usually dont read Mackys but this one was fucking awesome.

    FANTASTIC JOB GUYS

    <3
    August 25th, 2010 at 11:42pm
  • squidge

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    this story was amazing!
    it was so different from all the other fanfics, it had a really good plot and i loved it!
    so sad its over but i think you chose a good place to end it :)
    July 12th, 2010 at 07:17am
  • MagicIsMyLife

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    not goin to lie. this is about the 3rd time i've started to read this. and i love it :)
    i cried at the end, not cause they were the only ones left. but because it was the end
    July 8th, 2010 at 04:49am
  • Naked_Zombie

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    Oooh this was one of my favorite stories <3

    It almost hurts to see it end but I like the turn out =]
    July 5th, 2010 at 07:14pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    *jaw drops* What? That's the end! I mean it was good, but...I just feel like there should be more. Maybe a sequel? Please?
    July 5th, 2010 at 06:22pm
  • trista tragedy

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    best story EVER! :D
    July 4th, 2010 at 10:29pm
  • Flatline

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    This story was amazing - I've just read it this evening and I couldn't put it down :L
    July 4th, 2010 at 08:52pm
  • MamaZ

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    ....they all died that is so sad...tears want to fall. i really didn't see everyone dying coming into play at all, but dame it added a huge effect to the end. this was a great story and it was an even better ride.
    July 4th, 2010 at 06:37pm
  • Kezabell

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    The end? NO! It can't be! I had really gotten into that, I was looking forward to a little bit more smut. I still can't believe that you killed Brian, but at least the others got out alive, 'Every Cloud....' and all that jazz. I'm gonna miss this story so much=( Good luck with future projects XX
    July 4th, 2010 at 12:36pm
  • LamePanda

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    wait.. so.. it's, uh, over..?
    July 4th, 2010 at 11:28am
  • secrets-that-die

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    It's the end? aww
    July 4th, 2010 at 09:46am
  • secrets-that-die

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    omg, their the only ones left!
    wonder what their going to do now
    Update Soon Please
    <33
    July 4th, 2010 at 08:18am
  • LamePanda

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    oh my god.. they are all dead?? o_O woah....
    July 3rd, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • starkidheather

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    holy fuck!
    *subscribes*
    woah. this is seriously a work of fucking art.
    i cannot even begin to describe how much i love this.
    i wonder what's gonna happen now that the guys are the only ones left.
    <3
    July 3rd, 2010 at 04:28pm
  • AVictimOfTheSystem.

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    O.O
    i'll try to come up with an idea for it soon.
    i promise, i promise.
    June 29th, 2010 at 11:33pm
  • sometimes it happens

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    meh.
    i want this.... miss it....

    do not deny me.
    you can't.
    LOOK AT MY SAD FACE.

    ;____________o

    LOOK AT IT. SOAK IT IN. IT'S SO SAD.

    please? <3?
    June 29th, 2010 at 08:55pm