October 26th, 2008 at 11:51am
Have Kids, Then We'll Talk - Comments
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is that chapter the end of the story? I saw there is a sequel and its two chapters in. So are all the other characters done?October 24th, 2008 at 11:59pm
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Nothing beats a slight alcoholic with the beginning of withdrawal systems
and a hangover...
Perhaps more soon?October 22nd, 2008 at 06:03am -
Everytime I remember this story it gets update
I hope this is not where it ends
nor where aiden ends...October 20th, 2008 at 01:27am -
This story is absolutely stunning. It is probably the most well-written piece of internet literature that I have ever read. It took me quite a while to get through the thirty-two chapters, but I'm very glad to say that I have finished it, and it is officially my favorite story on the whole of the world wide web.
I'm hoping 32 is not where it ends?September 14th, 2008 at 07:55pm -
amazing chapterrrr.
I love this story.
Dick I feel for him but he can be a real dick too.August 18th, 2008 at 08:13pm -
hoh dear, she's in trouble now
great updated as per usual =]
xxxAugust 18th, 2008 at 07:40pm -
dick wentz jr would be a horrible name
no one would want to be Dick jr...August 16th, 2008 at 05:56am -
Words cannot display my feelings for this last chapterrrrr.
Amazing though.
All of these last chaptersss.August 15th, 2008 at 05:10am -
oh dick...August 15th, 2008 at 04:10am
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sorry double postAugust 12th, 2008 at 05:45am
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if only it had been a dance to Under Pressure....August 12th, 2008 at 05:45am
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I don't really know what to say, Isa. My reviews usually suck.
You already know I liked it. My favourite part being Jay's blackmailing to get the Dickwad up on the table to dance...
And Harley.. wow. Jay's in with the ladiessss.
I love how Jay and Dick interact with eachother, it amuses me.August 11th, 2008 at 02:02pm -
hahaha!
I'm not surprised it was fun to write, it was fun to read. I do love how intelligent and well mannered Jared is, yet under the influence he can't help but become, well, a teenager. It's a shame Charlie ran off really. I loved the description of her being intoxicating to him, as i did the description of her being chanel mingled with cigarettes.
I love this story. :cute: It's amazing.August 11th, 2008 at 01:58pm -
fuck me sideways.
this is brill.
oh dickwad (L)August 11th, 2008 at 01:03pm -
Ah yes, because drinking will solve everything.
x]August 8th, 2008 at 11:16pm -
this story is amazing! ^^
please write more! =DJuly 21st, 2008 at 01:11pm -
I'm really glad this got updated I really love this story.
Very teenage angst and edgy what more could you want?
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I loveddd it so damned much.July 8th, 2008 at 09:37pm
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ooohhh
I love this story, it's all so complex and intricate, and so well written. The last chapter was great- everyone's felt that kinda angsty, should-I/Shouldn't-I situation. Very well written and described. I like Adelaide as a character alot, actually. :] I think she's more intelligent than Shay give her credit for.July 8th, 2008 at 11:02am
It's "before this story" But no, this story isn't finished.