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  • Chemical Heart.

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    crash.landing!:
    is that chapter the end of the story? I saw there is a sequel and its two chapters in. So are all the other characters done?
    That's a prequel. :XD

    It's "before this story" But no, this story isn't finished.
    October 26th, 2008 at 11:51am
  • Middleman.

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    is that chapter the end of the story? I saw there is a sequel and its two chapters in. So are all the other characters done?
    October 24th, 2008 at 11:59pm
  • Photo-proofed kisses

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    Nothing beats a slight alcoholic with the beginning of withdrawal systems
    and a hangover...

    Perhaps more soon?
    October 22nd, 2008 at 06:03am
  • Photo-proofed kisses

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    Everytime I remember this story it gets update
    I hope this is not where it ends
    nor where aiden ends...
    October 20th, 2008 at 01:27am
  • Ohh pretty eyes

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    This story is absolutely stunning. It is probably the most well-written piece of internet literature that I have ever read. It took me quite a while to get through the thirty-two chapters, but I'm very glad to say that I have finished it, and it is officially my favorite story on the whole of the world wide web.

    I'm hoping 32 is not where it ends?
    September 14th, 2008 at 07:55pm
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    amazing chapterrrr.
    I love this story.
    Dick I feel for him but he can be a real dick too.
    August 18th, 2008 at 08:13pm
  • Crystalmatters

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    hoh dear, she's in trouble now
    great updated as per usual =]
    xxx
    August 18th, 2008 at 07:40pm
  • Photo-proofed kisses

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    dick wentz jr would be a horrible name
    no one would want to be Dick jr...
    August 16th, 2008 at 05:56am
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Words cannot display my feelings for this last chapterrrrr.
    Amazing though.
    All of these last chaptersss.
    August 15th, 2008 at 05:10am
  • TeaCakeLady

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    oh dick...
    August 15th, 2008 at 04:10am
  • Photo-proofed kisses

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    sorry double post
    August 12th, 2008 at 05:45am
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    if only it had been a dance to Under Pressure....
    August 12th, 2008 at 05:45am
  • Chemical Heart.

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    I don't really know what to say, Isa. My reviews usually suck.

    You already know I liked it. My favourite part being Jay's blackmailing to get the Dickwad up on the table to dance...

    And Harley.. wow. Jay's in with the ladiessss.

    I love how Jay and Dick interact with eachother, it amuses me.
    August 11th, 2008 at 02:02pm
  • sketch.

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    hahaha!

    I'm not surprised it was fun to write, it was fun to read. I do love how intelligent and well mannered Jared is, yet under the influence he can't help but become, well, a teenager. It's a shame Charlie ran off really. I loved the description of her being intoxicating to him, as i did the description of her being chanel mingled with cigarettes.

    I love this story. :cute: It's amazing.
    August 11th, 2008 at 01:58pm
  • TeaCakeLady

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    fuck me sideways.
    this is brill.
    oh dickwad (L)
    August 11th, 2008 at 01:03pm
  • sketch.

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    Ah yes, because drinking will solve everything.
    x]
    August 8th, 2008 at 11:16pm
  • xkmmeelovesparamore

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    this story is amazing! ^^
    please write more! =D
    July 21st, 2008 at 01:11pm
  • Crystalmatters

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    I'm really glad this got updated I really love this story.
    Very teenage angst and edgy what more could you want?
    xxx
    July 11th, 2008 at 11:54pm
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    I loveddd it so damned much.
    July 8th, 2008 at 09:37pm
  • sketch.

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    ooohhh

    I love this story, it's all so complex and intricate, and so well written. The last chapter was great- everyone's felt that kinda angsty, should-I/Shouldn't-I situation. Very well written and described. I like Adelaide as a character alot, actually. :] I think she's more intelligent than Shay give her credit for.
    July 8th, 2008 at 11:02am