Have Kids, Then We'll Talk - Comments

crash.landing!:

is that chapter the end of the story? I saw there is a sequel and its two chapters in. So are all the other characters done?

That's a prequel. :XD

It's "before this story" But no, this story isn't finished.

is that chapter the end of the story? I saw there is a sequel and its two chapters in. So are all the other characters done?

Nothing beats a slight alcoholic with the beginning of withdrawal systems
and a hangover...

Perhaps more soon?

Everytime I remember this story it gets update
I hope this is not where it ends
nor where aiden ends...

This story is absolutely stunning. It is probably the most well-written piece of internet literature that I have ever read. It took me quite a while to get through the thirty-two chapters, but I'm very glad to say that I have finished it, and it is officially my favorite story on the whole of the world wide web.

I'm hoping 32 is not where it ends?

amazing chapterrrr.
I love this story.
Dick I feel for him but he can be a real dick too.

hoh dear, she's in trouble now
great updated as per usual =]
xxx

dick wentz jr would be a horrible name
no one would want to be Dick jr...

Words cannot display my feelings for this last chapterrrrr.
Amazing though.
All of these last chaptersss.

oh dick...

sorry double post

if only it had been a dance to Under Pressure....

I don't really know what to say, Isa. My reviews usually suck.

You already know I liked it. My favourite part being Jay's blackmailing to get the Dickwad up on the table to dance...

And Harley.. wow. Jay's in with the ladiessss.

I love how Jay and Dick interact with eachother, it amuses me.

hahaha!

I'm not surprised it was fun to write, it was fun to read. I do love how intelligent and well mannered Jared is, yet under the influence he can't help but become, well, a teenager. It's a shame Charlie ran off really. I loved the description of her being intoxicating to him, as i did the description of her being chanel mingled with cigarettes.

I love this story. :cute: It's amazing.

fuck me sideways.
this is brill.
oh dickwad (L)

Ah yes, because drinking will solve everything.
x]

this story is amazing! ^^
please write more! =D

I'm really glad this got updated I really love this story.
Very teenage angst and edgy what more could you want?
xxx

I loveddd it so damned much.

ooohhh

I love this story, it's all so complex and intricate, and so well written. The last chapter was great- everyone's felt that kinda angsty, should-I/Shouldn't-I situation. Very well written and described. I like Adelaide as a character alot, actually. :] I think she's more intelligent than Shay give her credit for.