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  • StayGold.

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    Oh my Jesus Christ on a slice of grilled cheese.
    I feel like I've commented on this before... strange.
    I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. <3
    I read this and almost teared up. <3
    One of my all-time favorite stories. <3
    No joke. <333333333
    June 18th, 2011 at 01:14pm
  • blue.

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    SQUEEEEEEEE. :)

    I'm glad you liked it!
    I would love to continue it maybe, but I don't know what else could happen. :(
    June 25th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • earthtobex

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    This is the best thing I've ever read on Mibba and I hope you know that ahah
    You should totally make this into a complete story; it would be amazinggggggggg! lol

    But seriously, fantastic.
    June 25th, 2010 at 04:54am
  • blue.

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    Why, thank you. :)
    June 11th, 2010 at 07:18am
  • Conspiracies!

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    I don't know who Dallas is, I actually searched the tags for Matt Dallas and this came up, haha. I still like it though. You are an amazing writer, you drew me into it and it wasn't even that long.
    June 11th, 2010 at 12:47am
  • TheCoreysGirl

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    This is really good! :) I like it a lot. And Dallas Winston is so cool, too. :)
    May 18th, 2010 at 10:29pm
  • inactive..

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    This was...amazing.
    I'm seriously jealous that I can't write like you can.
    May 15th, 2010 at 11:43pm
  • freeflyer.

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    Awh this was adorable(:
    I loved it, and I pictured Dally, even when I didn't know it was about him.
    And if you want another Outsiders story to read I have one called I'm Just A Grease.
    I think you might like it(:

    Anywho, again this was great, you did a wonderful job on the details, the end was kinda sad but he will come back for her, unless it's when he dies o.o
    April 19th, 2010 at 03:42am
  • blue.

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    Ooh! I'll go now.
    I'm stoked for it. :)

    And I'm glad you liked the story. :)
    February 21st, 2010 at 07:06am
  • That Nerdy Chick

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    Aw, I like this. It's really sweet.
    Check out my story, A Beautiful Lie.
    It's about Dallas.
    February 20th, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • blue.

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    First of all, thanks for checking out this story. I appreciate it more than you know.

    About the story, it's based on the character Dallas Winston from S.E. Hinton's The Outsiders. So if you've read the book, or seen the movie, that's what you can kinda picture when you read it. Or not. It's your choice.

    This is one of the story's that I really worked at, and with all my heart, I hope you liked it. <3

    Comments would be so fantastic, honestly! So drop a line; we can be friends.
    December 13th, 2009 at 09:26pm