It's A Shame I'm A Dream - Comments

I also really miss this story. Update soon, yeah? It would be much appreciated. :)

I really miss this story. I adore it severely and really just want you to update again. It is as beautiful as anything could possibly be and contains a type of bittersweet joyous sorrow that not many people can properly communicate.

Like I said, I really miss it. :(

UPDATTTTTTTTTTTTEEE
that one took way too long.

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You are an amazing writer. I just read the first chapter and I absolutely loved it. You're so descriptive. It makes it so interesting. I love the similes and metaphors you use to get across the feeling you want. This is probably my favorite story on Mibba now, and I've only read the first chapter!

I'm really glad you enjoy it! <3

Thank you everyone for being so supportive, i honestly have to say i am blessed with my readers. Every time I get a comment from you guys, it just makes my day and i love to keep writing. thank you for everything.

A lovely update filled with a lot of mystery. Oh, did she just cheat on her boyfriend? :o I sure hope she did not. Although, Aiden is a wonderful boy maybe liking each other would not be so ridiculous.

I would write more but I have to go now, maybe I'll comment more later. I really did like this update, though.

Just finished reading chapter 15! I love how this story is different and original but isn't ridiculous and far-fetched. The more I read it, the more I like it. Keep up the great work!

We've missed you while you were away!!! <3

You are an amazing writer. I just read the first chapter and I absolutely loved it. You're so descriptive. It makes it so interesting. I love the similes and metaphors you use to get across the feeling you want. This is probably my favorite story on Mibba now, and I've only read the first chapter!

thank you.
i also really love that last line, it came to me when i was in the shower, aha.

yea, i'm sorry about the short chapters, i promise the next one will be a little longer. i've been a bit busy with schoolwork and such lately, but i'll try to make it a little more descriptive next time!

thanks for reading, i really appreciate it. <3 x

I can't believe we've come so far in this story, and not much of Aiden's life has really been expressed in much detail, all we get are glimpses of what Aiden was and is trying to change.

I am deeply moved by this chapter, you described everything so well, paused in conversations were it deemed most likely, and I was moved by what happened; I was mostly shocked as well to know that Kristina blames herself for the lose of her deceased boyfriend.

I loved the last line: “How can we forgive and forget when there’s nothing to forgive, but everything to forget?” It just seems so true and I sometimes wonder if you can just erase so many memories, but then you would never have experienced the pain of love, or of being loved. And that's a sad story to tell.

You're doing a wonderful job so far, but I was disappointed to see such a short chapter.
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I suppose you're busy, that's fine!

This is a beautifully written story.

Just - wow. You really show what he's feeling, and that can be really hard to do.

Subscribing now.

i know i'm sorry! D:
AND THANK YOU! <33 x

Update! It took way too long for you to update.. I missed this story so much and I loved the update. MORE PLEASE! <3

THere honestly isn't a thing about this story I don't like. The writing is incredible, the story is interesting, and lovely, and so sad.
Kudos, many, many kudos. Please, keep it up.

update right now, right when you get this comment! pleaseee! ♥

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I can sort of see where the title fits into all of this now. Aiden reads her diaries, imagines everything that happened to her but wonders why he never saw her in the hallway, in class and during breaks. However, this diary to him is a way for him to connect with the 'ghost' of Taylor but to him this is all a dream because he's never met her yet all these feelings are arising to the surface. Am I getting warmer or am I colder?

colder? bahaha.

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I really, especially loved the last line: It was like pulling the plug on a dam. I can definitely see what you're getting at with Aiden meeting all these people that could have links to Taylor's past and you're being so discreet about it, almost like Stephen King would, you're hiding a secret and allowing us to solve the puzzle piece by piece.

i'm so honored to be compared to Stephen King.

thank you guys so much! <3
xx

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If this is a puzzle then I am in a lot of trouble (I fail epically at puzzles; I can't even put one together that only has 10 pieces)

I love this and fall a little more for it every time you update, please do so soon. (:

I can sort of see where the title fits into all of this now. Aiden reads her diaries, imagines everything that happened to her but wonders why he never saw her in the hallway, in class and during breaks. However, this diary to him is a way for him to connect with the 'ghost' of Taylor but to him this is all a dream because he's never met her yet all these feelings are arising to the surface. Am I getting warmer or am I colder?

I really, especially loved the last line: It was like pulling the plug on a dam. I can definitely see what you're getting at with Aiden meeting all these people that could have links to Taylor's past and you're being so discreet about it, almost like Stephen King would, you're hiding a secret and allowing us to solve the puzzle piece by piece.

This is peeking my interest every update you throw down on the tables; I am loving the idea behind it too. It all seems to mysterious and calm, but for the reader you're anxious to know so much. Yet, you, are just giving us all a piece to connect to one gigantic jigsaw puzzle and we have to find every other piece scattered throughout the world.

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man,
you should definitely see the senior who goes to my school that i based aiden off of.
he's gorgeous.
(not to my friends, apparently, but to me he is. for some reason, the first time i saw him, alex gaskarth popped into my head.)
xx

Wow, Aiden's becoming a babe magnet... it's such a shame that it's at a time when he doesn't want to use his magnetic abilities. ):