July 16th, 2010 at 03:49am
I know this isn't a proper review, but I have to say that you are by far my most favorite author on here.
Seriously. RARELY do I find anyone who honestly possesses the skills of which they're praised for. And I hate that you don't get more recognition, even if you have so few stories, because those few are flooring. Most of the time I'm not very impressed with, well generally anyone's writing skills because they're all the same. But you shine. :)
She promised we could stay there for days without anybody intruding our Neverland, a place that was ours alone, unyielding and imperishable.
We reached that familiar doorstep far sooner than I’d hoped, and its intimacy seemed callous upon return. I know the feeling exactly.
Even as she tore through bedrooms, stuffing them into taut suitcases, I wanted to believe in her.
She lent a contrite smile, her angles calculated and finite. The echoing of ite is poetic, but this sentence seems mathematically constructed somehow (I swear it's not just the angles reference). Actually, I almost feel like there's a odd, delicate branch of math behind your writing. I'm probably insane, but it's something about the precision and the word choice... You can yell at me if this offends you, of course. I will now stop crazying on your page. G'day.
:)