Very cute one-shot. I liked how this one wasn't very rushed and there was a good, well-developed plot line involved. =]. Your writing was fantastic. Just one little thing, in the beginning you said Desmond's eyes were green, and then in the last paragraph you said they were blue. Just a bit confused on that. But beside that, you did a fantastic job! =].
December 22nd, 2009 at 03:35am