This story had a fantastical mythology about it. It was beautiful and whole and spoke of such intense longing of freedom. It was dark and light at the same time. The words and message just flowed beautifully; you are trapped, and you can't escape. And I loved the Poe reference in there.
My only complaint is that the text is ridiculously light in the layout. I had to highlight it just to read it. I thought the colors used were really quite lovely, but perhaps you should think about making the text in the body of it a darker color? It would be much appreciated. All in all, I loved this.
My only complaint is that the text is ridiculously light in the layout. I had to highlight it just to read it. I thought the colors used were really quite lovely, but perhaps you should think about making the text in the body of it a darker color? It would be much appreciated. All in all, I loved this.