Like I already told you, miss. This made me so sad. D: I really love how you switched from dream to real life so much. I thought that was perfect. And the dream was a really good way to incorporate the fact that Tom was so upset about her death.
The last dream was the scariest I think. It really freaked me out to be honest. Haha. But I thought it was a really good touch.
Although, I'm rather confused on how Tom fell asleep on the tour bus and woke up at the apartment.. Haha.
The last dream was the scariest I think. It really freaked me out to be honest. Haha. But I thought it was a really good touch.
Although, I'm rather confused on how Tom fell asleep on the tour bus and woke up at the apartment.. Haha.