I liked this. This is the first three-shot I've read so far, and it was really cute, and a unique storyline.
You should use little more punctuation at times, a few of the sentences were a little choppy and seemed like they were missing a period to divide them or a comma here and there. ;)
You should use little more punctuation at times, a few of the sentences were a little choppy and seemed like they were missing a period to divide them or a comma here and there. ;)