Okay so I know this story has been finished for a while now but I just sat down and read all 60 chapters!! It was seriously amazing, I loved it! And the ending because it wasn't cliche or anything!! Your so lucky to get so many comments & subscribers!! I have a max green and Ronnie radke story (not a slash) and I only have 11 comments :'( sucks, a lot. It's called four letter lie just incase you wanted to read it.
But anyway, thankyou for giving me the chance to read such an amazing story!!
I'm reading this for the 3rd time and it's still as good as I remember! :D
"So lemme get this straight; Max used to be a big druggie, but isn't anymore cause he's fat now and you think he should be on Biggest Loser..." HAHAHA, you have no idea how much I laugh everytime I read that. I'm wiping away tears, literally! :'D
my god... i saw this and read it for the past four days. o my god, it was so GOOD! although it made me slightly unhappy at chapter 40 and the last chapter. but it was still SO AMAZING. i cried quite a bit too. i just... omygod *reads again*
I found this and read the whole thing during all of yesterday and tonight! I loved it so so so much :) NOW UPDATE YOUR OTHER RONNIE STORY. Hahaha, loved it x
I know im late commenting... and i have no idea when this was posted, but, i think your an amazing writer. This story managed to set me in tears- and that doesn't usually happen. It was amazing, sure Max looked like an asshole, but you betrayed something in a character we normally don't see these days. So, im just commenting -sorry its late again- to tell you this: This is the first story I have ever read on Mibba, i read it a long time ago, and I just finished it again for the 2nd time. I'm crazy about this, this is something you would wanna read so many times without even getting sick of it. And also, to people who think this sucks, you obviously have something wrong with you. Thats all, sorry about the lateness again :S <3
okay so i was reading your story. And i say was because im on chapter 50 and i can not even fucking finish it! Why cant i finish it? Well thats because frankly it fuckin sucks! You make max look like an ass, then make him awsome and make it all a dream, and then then make ronnie die and then fuckin jade be pregnate with his baby! You Suck! Love, A very angry fangirl who has too much time on her hands but still waste to much on this fuckin story! Byebye!
Amazing story. You made it so intersting by her having a new horrible problem every 3 chapters haha. I usally just read half of a story on mibba because it gets boring after a while but I read all the chapters in this story because it always leaves you wondering what's going to happen next. I espessily loved the part when she was pregenet with maxs babys and she was only dreaming haha that was funny and shocking. Wow this comment is getting way to long anyways great story one of the best I read on this site :)
i'm not even kidding, this is like in the top three of the best stories i've ever read<3 i always waited for the emails that told me you updated this :P hehe it was simply amazing(: <3/ Sarah
Wow ... 60 chapters .... haha, I can still remember when I first found this story the first day I joined Mibba. Of all the ETF fanfics I've read, on here or on Livejournal groups, this one is my favourite. I wish it were even longer, but every story needs to end eventually! And you wrote a really good ending for this. I'm satisfied with how it all turned out.
Thank you for thanking me on your list of commenters. I actually put off reading this chapter for a few days now because I've been super-tired and I wanted to make sure I was awake enough to write one final comment on this story right after I read the chapter. =) This fanfic was mostly hilarious, very dramatic, and entertaining and it's made my day quite a few times. I'll definitely check out any new ETF fanfics you write.
aww finally ronnie and jade get to be happy.. i cnt believe max said dat the baby had ruin everything.. he's a fuking bitch..hopefully jade did really forget wat she felt for him..
THIS WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!... it had its sad moments which made me cry nd its happy moments which made my day happier.. ohhh nd THANX FOR PUTTING MY NAME IN THE LIST:)
I AM So HAPPY!!! she got over that cuntmaster max. i cant stand people who blame kids for ruining a marriage or relationship. She finally can be happy with the guy who she can always depend on and love and it's Ronnie. i love the ending. and lol yay!!!1 im in the thank you list lol cant wait to read the next story your making
i mean.. the story.. you know what i mean ! <3