Are We Cursed to This Life? - Comments

  • leighabelle

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    =(
    Alex, you should have went home with Jack. He's so much better.
    Anyway, more soon?
    February 23rd, 2010 at 05:11am
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    I feel so bad for Jack, he's trying so hard to tell Alex and he's still confused. He needs a hug. I'm going to find him and give him one.

    As for Alex, he needs to get his head on straight and think before he acts.

    Still in love with this story, by the way.
    February 23rd, 2010 at 01:48am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    RingRing
    Progresso commercial
    haha.
    And as for this update?
    I
    loved
    it
    :]
    February 23rd, 2010 at 01:02am
  • CeruleanBluEyes

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    Lol I shall tell you when i post it...
    Lol idk where you should start.
    You could say they fell asleep together watching the movie.
    Or have One of the girlfriends walk in one time while they kiss during movie.?
    Lol Idk if these two tip thingys help but it was worth a shot xD
    February 21st, 2010 at 12:44am
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    Bahahahah, awwwwwwwwh!
    Jack's mum is quite obviously the most epic mum EVER.
    She's all wise and awesome and totally cool with it. ^_^
    Actually, I think she's just what they need right now, hahaha.
    x]
    xx
    February 20th, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • Nick Stokes.

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    i dont think i could ever get bored of this story, its freaking amazing xD
    keep writing :D

    i came on to two chapters so i was like YUSSSS :P

    Mommy Barakat walking in on them was a good idea xD
    i was sat here wrapped up in a blanket (cause im just that cool) thinking "oh noes D:"

    yeah...ANYWAYS
    keep it up :D
    (L)
    February 20th, 2010 at 03:08pm
  • CeruleanBluEyes

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    You're so welcome for me reading. Lol it is definitely worth the read. i LOVE it. :) Lol please keep it going. If you need ideas dont feel the hesitation to ask. Lol i is also writing a slash i guess. I am gunna actually try and get it published. It is gay(Duh its a slash xD). Has vampires, witches, shapeshifters, and faeries. Lol lots of drama , depression, cutting, and suicidal thoughts. Please check it out when I get around to putting it up :)
    February 20th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    I love Mrs. Barakat's reaction, she just acts like nothing happend. She's an awesome mom.

    I'm loving this story. I will never believe it is over until you say that it's the last chaper in big bold, italicized words with like 33 exclamation points. Because believers never die, Steff. I believe in this story. I'm excited.
    February 20th, 2010 at 04:25am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    Ehehehehehe
    uuppddaattee :]
    lovely
    lovely
    lovely
    :]
    more soon?<3
    February 20th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • leighabelle

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    Buuuusted!
    Hah. I'm glad Bkat's mom is cool with it. Of course, I'd be happy with two boys kissing also ;)
    More soon? I really love this.
    February 20th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • CeruleanBluEyes

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    I liked it alot, your story was great and I loved the characters. Is it over.? Or shall there be more chapters?
    February 19th, 2010 at 11:35pm
  • amberisariot

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    this story is pretty epic :)

    ohai, I'm Amber, I'm new here so I'm still trying to figure all this out...
    February 19th, 2010 at 01:42pm
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    "It searches for another heart that will complete it's own, like puzzle pieces, but there are just two parts."
    I ADORED that line. I think it defined everything really well. I dunno, it just really stood out, and I love it. ^_^
    Their little awkward conversation was well cute. I'm glad they didn't just throw everything out of the window. :3
    xx
    February 18th, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • leighabelle

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    And I still really love this story. I think you had that conversation go over well =)
    Can't wait to read more!
    February 18th, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    D-don't tell me it's over already...
    --cries--
    EITHER WAY I LOVED THIS :]
    and you are
    an
    amazing
    writer :]
    with looove, haha,
    yo new frieenddd.

    Ps:
    OLI SYKESSSS :D
    February 18th, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    I love that I go MIA from this site for like a day and come back to see two amazing updates for this story =D
    I'm glad they talked, even if they didn't acomplish much by talking. I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO excited to see what happens next!

    (And yess, all those Os were necessary)
    February 18th, 2010 at 09:23pm
  • leighabelle

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    I seriously love this story so much!
    But, I'm not sure what they should say. The only thing I can suggest is that I want them together in the end, obviously. I dunno, just have them be all shy and stuff but speak how they really feel and go from there.
    Hope I could be some sort of help and I can't wait to read more!!
    February 18th, 2010 at 06:57am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    Jesus
    I love this story
    and I love your writing
    and see
    I am so happy I was able to read this today
    because I have to read like
    four books--not closeto being done with any of them--by next Monday
    I have a Trojan on my computer
    and my phone doesn't let me access mibba fully
    like
    at all.
    And so I would be updating my jalex
    but those are the problems
    and I have writers block
    D: bleh :P I want school to be over.
    But I shall hopefully have a chapter up by tomorrow
    if I can.
    Stupidschool.
    Haha.
    But to leave this comment on a good note
    I loved it
    and I want more<3 :]
    February 18th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • Melly Jelly

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    Love this story. <3
    Can't wait to read the convo between Alex and Jack. 0.o
    I really hope they give it a shot!!!
    Update soon?
    =D
    February 18th, 2010 at 12:53am
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    I just read this all, and yeah, I sorta love it a lot.
    :3
    I love the fact that they're not like "OMFG I LOVE U SO MUCH, LIKE, OMFG. NON-STOP SEX PLZ?!" x]
    It's actually well-written and they're actually believable characters.
    I'm dying for more, so update soon, please? ^_^
    xx
    February 17th, 2010 at 11:28pm