Okay, I feel kind of bad because Comment Swap brought me here and I'm your first comment and I really know nothing about Bill Kaulitz except that he's in Tokio Hotel...right? (I think my sister's best friend has a shirt with his face on it.) Anyway...I did read through it because I didn't want to just nix it.
So, I really like this story. I saw you said it was all finished so I was more eager to read all seven chapters before commenting. I like your characters and I think you did an excellent job portraying the differences between them. Sometimes when stories have a fair amount of characters they all muddle together but that was definitely not the case in this.
I like the plot and how you executed it. After the first chapter I was really pulled in, which was surprising because I didn't really know who I was reading about. I think that really speaks to your writing ability.
Overall just amazing job and I'm so sorry that your first comment had to come from someone who knows nothing about Tokio Hotel or Bill Kaulitz.
July 3rd, 2012 at 06:37pm
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So, I really like this story. I saw you said it was all finished so I was more eager to read all seven chapters before commenting. I like your characters and I think you did an excellent job portraying the differences between them. Sometimes when stories have a fair amount of characters they all muddle together but that was definitely not the case in this.
I like the plot and how you executed it. After the first chapter I was really pulled in, which was surprising because I didn't really know who I was reading about. I think that really speaks to your writing ability.
Overall just amazing job and I'm so sorry that your first comment had to come from someone who knows nothing about Tokio Hotel or Bill Kaulitz.