Broken Danger - Comments

WHAT. THE. HECK. A KISS ON THE CHEEK?! THATS ALL?! grrr. Now I have to keep reading. But honestly this whole taking it slow and waiting forever to make them fall in love is cute :) and refreshing :)

This story is amazing and sad. I keep waiting for him to kiss her but it never happens. I'm on chapter 17 and stoked to be able to just keep reading through it. He really needs to kiss her! Haha :) gotta go keep reading! TTFN

this story was amazing... actually all of your stories are amazing!!
im off to read the sequal now!
woopwoop!

Juuust finished reading this >>
AmAzInG!!!

It took me two days to read all of it, && you got me HOOKED, like a stripper on a pole : )

On too the sequel~
Great job
<3

This was by far one of my favorite stories on the website; i am aware that this was way back and a while ago you have written this story but i just feel like i have to say thank you. Youre writing is soo... haha i dont know... I just loved it:D You're a very good writer and i love how your characters developed over time rather than them changing so fast in a short period of time like some i've read. I've read two chapters of your sequel and already love where you are going with that also.
-I love your stories:D You write soo well, there short and sweet. (hahaha sorry this was long)-

I started this and couldn't stop.
I've been reading it all day, and after this I'm going on to the sequel.
Chapter 28 made me cry, it was hard to finish because I couldn't see it. Haha.
Anyway, I loved it SO much. And I'm excited for reading the sequel.

just read the whole story!
So happy you made a sequel! =D

Okay.
I'm crying now, so I'll keep it short.
I don't actually know what it was, but this just.. touched me in a way.. and I don't really know why or how or whatever.. but.
Yeah, just wanted to say thanks for writing it.
I think it was the chapter with Nick and Minnie, when they slept together.. yeah. That just totally made me break down crying. OH! It was when he said she was beautiful and that she shouldn't change. Yeah, that just made me snap..
hmm, anyway, my eyes are fogged up right now, so sorry for spelling etc. :D
Just.. thank you (: x

Took the time and re-read it :D Thought you should know that. I actually should be studying for this major test, but today I got to thinking about this story that I don't really remember the beginning anymore, so I figured - why not read it again? So, I did it :)
Still love it, still think it's awesome and now I'm off to read Here and Now. Again ;)

finally (:
my brain was gunna explode with all the thoughts raging in my head for this story.
finally; together.
finally; peace.
I dont mind drama; actually, ill really want drama.
but i dont want monroe to be the one guilty again.
say...nick did something wrong..monroe gets mad kinda thing.
omg! why nick? D:
hehe, because shes the only one in the story that didnt really; yeah.
such as nick ...somewhat cheating on monroe? yuh know what; idunno.
just dont do the ones wheer he blames everything on himself; i dont like when he does that.D:
I dunno if you will use my suggestions; but its just a thought.
well; back to my school work. -.-
i wish this was a movie; ill watch it everyday if nick was the actor :D
bye, update soon.

So I have just sat here and read this whole story!
AND ITS AMAZING!
I love it so much, ugh pure awesomeness :D
Now, I am off to read the sequel :)

It was amazing. AMAZING. I cried like a baby when Nick "broke up" with Monroe. I felt like I could feel her emotions, as if I was there, wacthing the entire thing. It was fantastic. And, I'm thoroughly enjoying the sequel. :)

Hey Tay :)
Sorry I didn't comment sooner, I've been grounded >:/
It's so sad, but so amazing. I'm going to go read the sequel now =D

this story is really incerdible

O_O It's done. I can't believe it! This will be my last comment for Broken Danger....wow.

Joe and Clarissa got married! I am so happy for them, they both go good for each other. Clarissa's crazy...Joe's...well not so much crazy as insane but you get my drift. I am though concerned for Nick, even though Nicholas was an ass in the last few chapters-and I still dispise his behavior towards Monroe then- I can't help but wonder if without Monroe Nick will fall back into his old habits; I mean I think it's good that Monroe is going to college and starting a company, she deserves everything she gets (like Joe said) but I still think Nick is kinda unstable, but yet almost stable. If that makes any sense.

Taylor you out did yourself yet again, this story is amazing and always be a classic in my eyes. Thank you for writing this, this story has been amazing to me and my life, it always brought a smile to my face when I wanted to cry or pull my hair out of my scalp. No seriously. You are an amazing writer, the best I have ever read material from. Shoot better then Charles Dickens and Harper Lee!

Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

I guess this is my last comment. *sigh* Goodbye broken Danger, Hello Here and Now.

Your biggest fan,
Samantha

okay, NICK AND MONROE need to be together again! I can't wait to start reading the sequal!!!! =)

I've read a lot of stories on Mibba and this is definitely one of my favorites. I loved it and I'm so excited for Here and Now.

awww :[

you should change your status, honey to "this amazingly good story is completed! read the sequel!" yeah...just had to get that out there.

I didn’t need Nick Jonas.
LIE LIE LIE, that sentence is a lie.

I had to get that out because no matter what Monroe and Nick both say, they both need each other.

Now that I've said that, let us embark on a trip down memory road. From the very beginning, this story has been absolutely amazing. Honestly, it was like nothing you've ever written before. I love everything that I've ever read from you, but I think I can say this one is my favorite.

Nick being such a douche is what made you always want to read. What would he say next, and how Monroe would react. The way they play off of each other is great.

By the end, I was so happy for the progress they made. That's why when he told her to leave, I was crushed along with her. It's sad the way they ended(for now), but I guess it makes sense. Nick never thought he was enough for her, so he let her go. He doesn't know how damn wrong he was!

All there is to say now, is goodbye Broken Danger, and hello to Here&Now. Let's see if this sequal can outshine the prequel. =)

PS. YOU'RE AWESOME and I LOOVVEE your writing. ha, just thought I'd say that.
PSS.- At fist I thought I could wait, but now I really wanna see the sequal! Post the first chapter soon please!

-Treasure.<3