All I Wanted Was You, John O'Callaghan. - Comments

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDD

This is a good story, it's been ages since you've updated, i hope you continue the story :)

UPDATE! :]

Wow, sorry for being so late on this! Just taking a small break from Mibba... You know, trying to have a life, trying to write some more, try to do this and that...
I failed at all of it, but whatever.

Anyways...
Uh, this one seemed longer. Maybe my mind's playing with me, or maybe I'm just a little more forgetful than before, but whatever. Feels a bit longer to me.

Okay, and it was written really well!
It was bordering on sad, and wasn't all that uplifting (especially near the end) but it was still really good. (Actually, I suppose the whole 'sad' thing just made it better, but whatever. Not my point.)

Anyways, good job :)

Awe. My heart aches for the girl! Seriously!
Longing for someone is horrible. Lol.
And dude, I love that cover John did! It's one of my
Faves! (:

dude, I don't like this story. just kidding (:

hey! i love this story! please update more :)

So that's why you wanted to know what I was going to major in! Nice touch! Lol. I feel so bad for Jenny. She has all this shot going on inside of her, and then her parents more than likely getting a divorce is just adding to if all. I've missed this story and I'm glad you're back to writing, lady! (:

Ohh, pick me! Pick me! I think I know who's back!

... I don't know, too much pop? Oopsies...

Uh, well, yay for drama?
I actually kinda like that stuff. I mean, everyone's always complaining about it, and here's me, thinking about how boring stories would be without it...

But, uh, anyways, good job :)
I liked it

(... I may as well have copied and pasted that from the last comment... (I'm so original, huh?))

Whaat?!
He wants her to go home without him? Umm, no.
If she didn't refuse, well, you'd have one angry kid after you.
Yeah, I control my little niece. I can send her after you. And just so you know, she whines soo much. It's one punishment to be around her.
Yay! He let it go.

*gasp* He set up for someone to pick her up at an airport? After she told him that she didn't want to?
That's - I dunno how to describe it. It's just...
Okay, I'll stop with that.

And why did she have to go? She gave in pretty easy, if you ask me...

Dude!! Alex.. But John.. And -- ohh..
Uhh, The John Oh thing wasn't intended.
Aah! Cheaters!! Oh well. Like I care. Affairs make things more interesting.

Everything went wrong?How?
Never mind, I doubt that it's not in the next chapter.

Aww, that's awful mean of you. Make me all happy 'cause of Alex, then all sad 'cause of John. (How did you know that I had a soft spot for both of them?)

Gah, You're mean. Why can't he just accept the apology?
Oh, god. Oh God. What's gunna happen when she leaves? is it gunna be a tense, and awkward, or are you gunna be a nice sneaky ninja, and make everything work itself out?

Oh, you're really mean. I mean, him flirting with a cashier, right in front of her. Sure, it's a guy thing to do, but still...

The reunion with everyone else was pretty nice though. At least there's one thing to be (somewhat) happy about.
You know, until John came up.
Ehh, whatever. I should be fine with it. I'm pretty mean in my writing, too :D

Anyways, good job :D
I like it :)

I have decided to not do a chapter by chapter "review" and just make on painfully long comment for everything (that I read in one sitting...).
Soo...

Aah! Remembering Sunday :D
Just wanted to say that.
And the first little bit was a nice introduction. It gives away a pretty big part of the story, but still manages to keep a lot hidden. And honestly, I like it when I actually want to know what's going to happen next.

I liked the cuteness of chapter two, and the mention of the Notebook. Yeah, sure, I'm like the one girl on the planet who hasn't actually seen the movie, but hey, I've heard it's romanitc. And that's good enough for me :D

Wow, short chapter.. But Alex, and forbidden stuff. I rather enjoy forbidden things. They're so much more fun than regular things.
Like, toasters? Boring. Some super toaster, that could fry a person on contact, that you're not allowed to go anywhere near? I'm sorry, but that's just incredible.

Hmm, shopping? With Alex?
Is this gunna be disastrous, or like, good?
Ehh, nevermind, don't answer. I'll know soon enough :D

Ooh, I guess that's... somewhere in the middle?
Ehh, whatever.
So, like.. Yeah. Apparently, he thinks she's hot. (Sorry, I have to have an awkward comment every once in a while. It just fits with my awkward personality...)

Oh, God. Screaming fans. That must be one of the few downsides to famedom. (God, I'm such a freak...)
And the end. Moment killer :(
That's no fun. God, it's like a regular toaster...

Well, anyways, I hope that's enough comment for you. I think I'll just stop at six chapters for now.

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AH-mazing.

Fucking John.
I have a feeling that he's regretting not even saying goodbye! I just know that he is!
And awe, I'm so close to the family! Lol.
Ugh. Lying to your family about a break up, is never good. I've seen it happen
Too many times! ):

I love Kennedy for being so thoughtful and caring.
I hate that John is being such an asshole about this whole thing.
He's making it seem like Jennifer's done this more than once, when that's not true.
Agh. I can't wait for more!

so sad.
:/
I wonder what's going to happen once she leaves.
Hm.
:)

That's so sad!
John needs to calm down, and then everything will be good.
:)

Hahaa. Julia Gulia! You had me worried! But I'm glad this all fits into the plot!
O'Callaghan needs to calm the freak down though! Seriously, it was just a kiss.
Now, if he had saw them jumpin' bones or something, then I'd understand.
But he could have at least let her explain or apologize to him! I mean, goodness! Lol.
Now she's going to leave with them on bad terms! Sigh. Never a good thing to do!

We can only hope no one saw Jenny and Alex. I bet someone did though.

Anyyyhoo, I really like this story so far :D
Keep up the awesome work :)

Oh no.
Who finds out?
AHHH.

I'm sad that she's leaving, but I'm anxious to see what her life will be like without seeing John on a daily basis! And Alex needs to back off! NO TOUCHY, TOUCHY, JENNY! Hahaa. Anddd, I have an extremely bad feeling that either John or Lisa, or both, saw them kissing at the end! FUDGSICLES! Hahaa. (:

Awezzz! I feel so special! Lol. If you ever need any help with your stories or whatever, I'll be more than glad to help you out! And if I'm unsure, I'll ask my go-to-girl for help! Lol. (: