White Rose On His Grave - Comments

Dead_Guardian_Angel:

That was really really sad.
I'm sorry about your dad... *hugs*
it was a very well written story. Definitely (though not a good way to describe it) a good read.

Pollywood Undead:

I'm really sorry for your dad. I know how it feels; mine died last year.

This piece was just beautiful. If I could write something half as good for someone I'd loved and lost, I'd be very happy. The entire work was art, not just words, so I can't choose a favourite bit.

I'm glad you have people who are there for you as well.

<3

Mindfreak.:

I can usually give really good feedback
but that has left me speechless.
Like . . . woah, I really don't know what to say.
I usually never feel this much emotion from a story.
Amazing.

Bastard Son.:

I won't quote best parts this time.
<3 The whole story is a best part.

As you did it to many on here, you've managed to make me cry as well.
I wish I could write something like this. Honestly. I wish I had it in me.
You do. <3

Death Becomes Me:

I'm so sorry about your father. My prayers are with your family. This one-shot was just amazing! Words can't even explain how much I loved this.

Josipa:

shalisa the strange.:

Words cannot do this story justice - nor can they do your father justice.
He sounded like he was a really great person, and I am truly sorry for you loss, Jos, I really am -hugs-

Your story was perfect, it was magnificent, it was heartfelt, it was just... perfect.

Thank you, Shal (: Thank you so much.

But you know me, I'm OK (: A happy bunny.

As I said, I felt I should write it. For him - to have something mine that will remind me of my dad, like a tribute to him.

And yeah, he really was a great person <3

shalisa the strange.:

Words cannot do this story justice - nor can they do your father justice.
He sounded like he was a really great person, and I am truly sorry for you loss, Jos, I really am -hugs-

Your story was perfect, it was magnificent, it was heartfelt, it was just... perfect.

Kerplunk Girl:

Josipa:

Kerplunk Girl:

Josipa, every single word in that was a work of art in itself. If I could paint a picture of that story it would capture more than just technique; but emotion - just like how that captured me. I did end up crying...

I really wish I could say something that will make you truely believe that what you have writen was art.

You made me shiver. You gave me goosebumps. I don't know how to describe the impression your comment has left on me. All I can say is that you made me smile. And more happier. And I believe every single word you said. Every.

Thank you, Die :hug: Thank you so much.

Good! I didn't want to give you any 'OH THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! AND THE WAY YOU SAID THIS AND THAT' kinda stuff because this is better than that, I just don't know how to describe it other than it being an artwork that expresses deep emotion that is just undescribable. It sounds like I'm butt kissing but what I'm saying is true. :cheese:

Funny thing is that I was talking about someone writing something that was the Picasso of stories, you pretty much stolen that title.

Little Miss Picasso of writing!

Come on, you'll make me fall off the chair, really (:

When you say it, it really means a lot - because you, Sara, Helena and some other people are really great writers and when you call me the Picasso of stories... Man..........

Josipa:

Kerplunk Girl:

Josipa, every single word in that was a work of art in itself. If I could paint a picture of that story it would capture more than just technique; but emotion - just like how that captured me. I did end up crying...

I really wish I could say something that will make you truely believe that what you have writen was art.

You made me shiver. You gave me goosebumps. I don't know how to describe the impression your comment has left on me. All I can say is that you made me smile. And more happier. And I believe every single word you said. Every.

Thank you, Die :hug: Thank you so much.

Kerplunk Girl:

Josipa, every single word in that was a work of art in itself. If I could paint a picture of that story it would capture more than just technique; but emotion - just like how that captured me. I did end up crying...

I really wish I could say something that will make you truely believe that what you have writen was art.