White Rose On His Grave - Comments

  • Thank you so much!
    I wish I could tell him some things but...
    February 5th, 2008 at 09:33am
  • so sad.
    Cry
    that had to have been horrible.
    but the story you've written because of it was absolutely beautiful.

    i love you for writing this story.
    In Love :arms:

    and...i have the same birthday as him.
    and he was the same age as my dad.
    ...i think i need to call him right now.
    February 5th, 2008 at 05:08am
  • Dead_Guardian_Angel:
    That was really really sad. Cry
    I'm sorry about your dad... *hugs*
    it was a very well written story. Definitely (though not a good way to describe it) a good read.
    Thank you!
    February 4th, 2008 at 09:34am
  • That was really really sad. Cry
    I'm sorry about your dad... *hugs*
    it was a very well written story. Definitely (though not a good way to describe it) a good read.
    February 3rd, 2008 at 03:00am
  • Thank you, Amanda, so much. So so so much! You left me speechless with your comment, really.
    Thank you, again.
    February 1st, 2008 at 09:07am
  • Wow. Just wow.

    I'm sorry to hear about your dad. I don't know how it feels to lose your father, but I know how it feels to lose a close friend, and I imagine the pain is worse than that. I imagine it's at least 600 times more painful...

    This is truly a work of art. You're extremely talented, Josipa. You know how to put enough emotion into what you write to make others feel the emotion you're trying to convey. It's a very admirable quality, and it's amazing to see nowadays, because talent like yours is very hard to come by.

    I'm glad you have people that can helped you through it. =)

    Once again, amazing job.
    February 1st, 2008 at 05:44am
  • Pollywood Undead:
    I'm really sorry for your dad. I know how it feels; mine died last year.

    This piece was just beautiful. If I could write something half as good for someone I'd loved and lost, I'd be very happy. The entire work was art, not just words, so I can't choose a favourite bit.

    I'm glad you have people who are there for you as well.

    <3
    Thank you so much :hug:
    December 30th, 2007 at 07:39pm
  • I'm really sorry for your dad. I know how it feels; mine died last year.

    This piece was just beautiful. If I could write something half as good for someone I'd loved and lost, I'd be very happy. The entire work was art, not just words, so I can't choose a favourite bit.

    I'm glad you have people who are there for you as well.

    <3
    December 28th, 2007 at 10:22am
  • Mindfreak.:
    I can usually give really good feedback
    but that has left me speechless.
    Like . . . woah, I really don't know what to say.
    I usually never feel this much emotion from a story.
    Amazing.
    You did give reallygood great feedback and
    I thank you for that (:
    November 16th, 2007 at 07:56pm
  • I can usually give really good feedback
    but that has left me speechless.
    Like . . . woah, I really don't know what to say.
    I usually never feel this much emotion from a story.
    Amazing.
    November 14th, 2007 at 10:00am
  • Bastard Son.:
    I won't quote best parts this time.
    <3 The whole story is a best part.

    As you did it to many on here, you've managed to make me cry as well.
    I wish I could write something like this. Honestly. I wish I had it in me.
    You do. <3
    Thank you, Sara :hug:
    November 5th, 2007 at 07:22pm
  • I won't quote best parts this time.
    <3 The whole story is a best part.

    As you did it to many on here, you've managed to make me cry as well.
    I wish I could write something like this. Honestly. I wish I had it in me.
    You do. <3
    October 27th, 2007 at 09:15pm
  • Death Becomes Me:
    I'm so sorry about your father. My prayers are with your family. This one-shot was just amazing! Words can't even explain how much I loved this.
    Thanks, Dana, thank you very much! It wasn't hard to write it; sentences were just coming to my mind; controlling me; I was just writing them down. I felt like I had to...
    October 25th, 2007 at 06:13am
  • I'm so sorry about your father. My prayers are with your family. This one-shot was just amazing! Words can't even explain how much I loved this.
    October 25th, 2007 at 05:00am
  • Josipa:
    shalisa the strange.:
    Words cannot do this story justice - nor can they do your father justice.
    He sounded like he was a really great person, and I am truly sorry for you loss, Jos, I really am -hugs-

    Your story was perfect, it was magnificent, it was heartfelt, it was just... perfect.
    Thank you, Shal (: Thank you so much.

    But you know me, I'm OK (: A happy bunny.

    As I said, I felt I should write it. For him - to have something mine that will remind me of my dad, like a tribute to him.

    And yeah, he really was a great person <3
    That's what makes it even better.
    October 12th, 2007 at 08:04pm
  • shalisa the strange.:
    Words cannot do this story justice - nor can they do your father justice.
    He sounded like he was a really great person, and I am truly sorry for you loss, Jos, I really am -hugs-

    Your story was perfect, it was magnificent, it was heartfelt, it was just... perfect.
    Thank you, Shal (: Thank you so much.

    But you know me, I'm OK (: A happy bunny.

    As I said, I felt I should write it. For him - to have something mine that will remind me of my dad, like a tribute to him.

    And yeah, he really was a great person <3
    October 12th, 2007 at 07:43pm
  • Words cannot do this story justice - nor can they do your father justice.
    He sounded like he was a really great person, and I am truly sorry for you loss, Jos, I really am -hugs-

    Your story was perfect, it was magnificent, it was heartfelt, it was just... perfect.
    October 12th, 2007 at 07:41pm
  • Kerplunk Girl:
    Josipa:
    Kerplunk Girl:
    Josipa, every single word in that was a work of art in itself. If I could paint a picture of that story it would capture more than just technique; but emotion - just like how that captured me. I did end up crying...

    I really wish I could say something that will make you truely believe that what you have writen was art.
    You made me shiver. You gave me goosebumps. I don't know how to describe the impression your comment has left on me. All I can say is that you made me smile. And more happier. And I believe every single word you said. Every.

    Thank you, Die :hug: Thank you so much.
    Good! I didn't want to give you any 'OH THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! AND THE WAY YOU SAID THIS AND THAT' kinda stuff because this is better than that, I just don't know how to describe it other than it being an artwork that expresses deep emotion that is just undescribable. It sounds like I'm butt kissing but what I'm saying is true. :cheese:

    Funny thing is that I was talking about someone writing something that was the Picasso of stories, you pretty much stolen that title.

    Little Miss Picasso of writing!
    Come on, you'll make me fall off the chair, really (:

    When you say it, it really means a lot - because you, Sara, Helena and some other people are really great writers and when you call me the Picasso of stories... Man.......... Swoon
    October 12th, 2007 at 07:26pm
  • Josipa:
    Kerplunk Girl:
    Josipa, every single word in that was a work of art in itself. If I could paint a picture of that story it would capture more than just technique; but emotion - just like how that captured me. I did end up crying...

    I really wish I could say something that will make you truely believe that what you have writen was art.
    You made me shiver. You gave me goosebumps. I don't know how to describe the impression your comment has left on me. All I can say is that you made me smile. And more happier. And I believe every single word you said. Every.

    Thank you, Die :hug: Thank you so much.
    Good! I didn't want to give you any 'OH THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! AND THE WAY YOU SAID THIS AND THAT' kinda stuff because this is better than that, I just don't know how to describe it other than it being an artwork that expresses deep emotion that is just undescribable. It sounds like I'm butt kissing but what I'm saying is true. :cheese:

    Funny thing is that I was talking about someone writing something that was the Picasso of stories, you pretty much stolen that title.

    Little Miss Picasso of writing!
    October 12th, 2007 at 07:11pm
  • Kerplunk Girl:
    Josipa, every single word in that was a work of art in itself. If I could paint a picture of that story it would capture more than just technique; but emotion - just like how that captured me. I did end up crying...

    I really wish I could say something that will make you truely believe that what you have writen was art.
    You made me shiver. You gave me goosebumps. I don't know how to describe the impression your comment has left on me. All I can say is that you made me smile. And more happier. And I believe every single word you said. Every.

    Thank you, Die :hug: Thank you so much.
    October 12th, 2007 at 06:59pm