I don't know what you meant about your writing being bad. This was cute. And kind of disheartening that it was all a dream.
The only thing I can fault you on is spelling and grammar. Just tenses, and apostrophes and little things like that. Repetition was a big thing too. Either way, gorgeous, and cute.
The only thing I can fault you on is spelling and grammar. Just tenses, and apostrophes and little things like that. Repetition was a big thing too. Either way, gorgeous, and cute.