Desolated Window - Comments

This was very dark differnt from the other two stories i have read of yours. I liked seeing this side to your writing it was very well written the ending line was perfectly grusome. :)

O.O WOW! It was so well written.It gave me chills.I loved it.

Wow... I'm going with everything Joey Jordison said.
This story was just amazing - it's just mind blowing [no pun attempted]

There's no need to be rude guys. That's out of order, and I don't appreciate it, and I can imagine that the author doesn't either. There was no need for that, at all. If it was possible for me to report you over those comments, I would, but alas, I don't think that's possible, so count yourselves lucky. I'm angered at how rude that was. So incredibly angry. All I can say is that I hope the author will move on from what you say, because they weren't constructive at all, merely pointless.

I liked the concept of this. Your writing's very strong, and I could feel Billie's pain. It was perhaps a little shorter than I would have liked, purely because I felt that with the subject matter, sometimes it's nice to be a tad more descriptive in describing just how depressed and lost Billie was. However, considering the shortness of the story, the words that you used to express his feelings captured the emotion really well, so I congratulate you on that. I felt genuinely sorry for the guy, and the images that you portrayed worked well. The fact that despite his closeness to the rest of the band, Billie still felt that this was the only way that he could manage, it was heartbreaking.

I applaud you for a job well done though. I really liked it, it displayed a true show of love and someone in a final, deperate act. It was also the first piece of fiction I've read in nearly two years that's not been Harry Potter related, so have a pat on the back for that as well! Seriously though, I did really like it. Excellent writing and an excellent concept. Well done :)

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!?!?I CRIED!ACTUAL TEARS!HOW COULD YOU!?!?!

i might not sleep now... thanks.... O_____O