Scarlet Rose - Comments

Haha this is great! I love gray, he reminds me a lot of Christian grey and it makes me laugh whenever he does something especially Christian like.

And the extra chapter was great, it didn't feel awkward at all! I would never have guessed that you hadn't written a threesome before.

@ rainbowfeatherhat
Thank you for your comment. And I'm glad to hear that the special chapter wasn't awkward or anything. Sadly, the MxFxFxM one is a bit harder to write than the previous one. I hope I'll have it done someday soon.

I really enjoyed this extra chapter you gave us. It certainly didn't show that you were apprehensive writing it. I'm looking forward to the next and final part!

@ Qhuinn
You're welcome :) It's okay, trust me lol..it was really good, can't wait for more!

Great story sorry am writing from my phone stupid autocorrect :) HEHEHE

Okey this might be like awkward to read at times but its a gray story and your a great writer so plz keep writing

@ animestars
Thank you!! I was really apprehensive about it due to the subject matter but then I though of the other things that are fifty times worse on these writing websites and said F it. Lol.
Im struggling a bit more with the foursome than I did with this chapter. I should have it done in the next week or two. :)

Bonus Chapter Part 1!! Can't wait for Part 2. You wrote this chapter really well though! Hope the next update is soon!!

@ this.is.bliss.
Thank you for the review and your input. I am currently having the story edited and will be posting the revisions as soon as my new beta sends it backs. Also, I actually wrote a scene for Scarlet, Mike, and Gray but can't post it until I get a better internet connection and Im currently working on a foursome with our two favorite couples.

Just read all of this between last night and today and found it incredibly interesting (not to mention super steamy ) I really enjoyed the complexities of the plot, while maintaining consistency, as well as not getting out of hand or ridiculous with any of the plot twists. The characters were strong and their personalities didn't waiver, which I see a lot of.

The only thing I feel needs improvement is some revision for minor spelling and grammatical errors. I also found myself waiting for either another dream with Gray and Mike or a group scene, since it was alluded to on multiple occasions, but neither happened. Not that it was necessary, it just seemed like both were kind of imminent.

Case in point, I absolutely loved it! :)

This was a really good chapter!! I enjoyed it very much!!

I loved this story. I'm a bit sad its over, but I enjoyed reading it while freaking out and laughing and yelling at both Gray and Scar.

I finally caught up with the chapters, omg I've been so behind lol! This is crazy!! I'm glad you've been updating though & I really hope that the next one is gonna be soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Yes! Another beautiful update! :) Please do keep writing

Wow. Just...wow. I am so glad I found this story! This is marvelous, please update soon! ;)

Glad you updated! Can't wait for more!

Can't wait for the next update!

Update again please!!!

I started reading this story 2 days ago, and I love it. I really hope you update soon..and maybe your flashdrive will show up!

:O Scarlet had it all planned out! She finally did the deed ;) It's a little sad, 'cause she actually loves him & it's not known if he feels the same way. There's a verrrrry small chance that he does. But, its sad :(

That was so passionate & intense! I was just like If I were Scarlet, I wouldn't have waited so long ;] haha, I can't wait for the next update. I think you're one of my favorite writers :D