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  • Fueled By Dana

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    This is really good.
    November 5th, 2007 at 08:29am
  • whatsername924

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    awesome update. so billie has 'friendly competition' in more than one way! lol that sux. oh well great update as always
    October 24th, 2007 at 06:06am
  • HealthyBodySickMind

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    "She avoided the casual stares of the innocent by standers. They're all the same. They're no different from the rest."

    I thought that line was genius. Good to have you back writing.
    October 22nd, 2007 at 02:13am
  • Phantasmagoria

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    screw karen i like sam more.
    October 20th, 2007 at 08:14pm
  • whatsername924

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    loved the update. good argument. i see a relationship blooming here.
    :P
    October 20th, 2007 at 11:14am
  • R!oT_GrRrL

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    thank you thank you thank you people! i'm glad you're liking it. school has really been sucking the life out of me, so it's good to know that i haven't zoned out and wrote something that doesn't make any sense.
    once again, hugs and kisses to my loyal readers!
    October 20th, 2007 at 10:38am
  • CharredRemains

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    Really different :D I dont like Karen... >.>
    October 19th, 2007 at 12:13pm
  • whatsername924

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    sorry i didnt cmnt sooner. School...bleh. Anyway, this is an awesome twist in the story. This Karen sounds like a -itch! Jeez...whats her deal!?!?! Anyway lov it as always! keep updating.
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    October 17th, 2007 at 09:42am
  • Hippieantarchist

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    Great Chapter.
    That is exactly what happens at school! lol
    October 16th, 2007 at 02:37am
  • Adie Delonge

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    i love the third chapter(:
    it really expresses what actually happens at school.
    lol.
    October 15th, 2007 at 10:41am
  • Adie Delonge

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    i totally love this story so far! its so cute(:
    i wish you would of went from the other story.
    but, i like what you did.
    you're a very talented writter.
    keep on goin!
    October 15th, 2007 at 06:26am
  • GreenDay2173

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    i just read the second chapter and she's going out with mike too isnt she?
    October 15th, 2007 at 05:28am
  • GreenDay2173

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    haha a brand name great story i subscribed
    October 15th, 2007 at 05:24am
  • Static Age

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    I love it so far.
    Haha, I agree with Jaredsgirlforever, the Ramones part was funny.
    More soon please? I'm subscribing.
    <33
    October 15th, 2007 at 04:48am
  • Hippieantarchist

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    haha i like this story
    I love the Ramones part.
    Update!
    October 15th, 2007 at 04:26am
  • LC_01

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    lmao the Ramones part made laugh cause i know a girl just like that xD good story thou =)
    October 14th, 2007 at 10:45am
  • whatsername924

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    This is starting out as an awesome story, cant wait to see what happens.Glad you posted another one I love the way you write!!
    I officially hate school for ruining us poor writers lives. I mean seriously we dont need schoool to be a writer...it just kinda helps.
    :P
    October 14th, 2007 at 10:24am
  • Phantasmagoria

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    "So...you like the Ramones, huh?" he said, pointing at her shirt. She looked confused.
    "Um, yeah..."
    "What's your favorite song by them?" She laughed.
    "Oh, I'm sorry. I thought it was a brand name."

    Lmfao.
    Great first chapter. In Love

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    October 14th, 2007 at 10:01am
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