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  • Shadow's Gates

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    nnoooooo!!!! brian, watch out! i hope brian's beats david's ass. update. *subscribbles*
    February 6th, 2010 at 09:20am
  • better.than.sex

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    Oh no!!! Brian needs to watch his back!!! ehh.
    i'm not really worried tho. he can take mr. ex-
    loser-washed up-football player. lol. great
    update! more soon :)
    February 6th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    Well done! I am thinking I'm ready to kick some football fuck ass tho!!!! Grrrrrrrr Lets have that update before I start killing off your characters on my mind.hehehehe
    February 6th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • jessclub

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    Ooh foreshadowing at the end?
    Love this story so far - very well written :)
    February 5th, 2010 at 07:45pm
  • Derpina.

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    Way to go Grandma. Cockblocker... >_>
    Haha. Keep em coming? :)
    February 5th, 2010 at 12:28pm
  • dinugget

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    NO, I don't hate this chapter AT ALL
    February 5th, 2010 at 12:26pm
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    Hahahahahaha....go Brian....I don't like cops either. Besides he could kick just about anyones ass. Hehehe. .. Update this one soon.
    January 28th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • Freak Out

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    hmm... girlfriend needs to kick david's ass. i think brian's gonna wanna stick around with this girl.
    January 28th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • dinugget

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    I loved it!
    January 27th, 2010 at 01:56pm
  • Synfullytwysted

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    I've just come across this story after having a little look around for something new to read and I absolutely love it. The relationship between Zack and Brian is so realistic and Erin's character is just wonderfully sweet, although I figure she can hold her own if need be.

    Fantastic so far, I really look forward to reading more :)
    January 27th, 2010 at 12:54pm
  • Derpina.

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    Great pool game :) this was a cute chapter!
    January 27th, 2010 at 11:25am
  • dinugget

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    Zacky is nice
    Haaaaaa
    January 22nd, 2010 at 02:41pm
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    Helloooo...I found this tonight and love it! So I hope you update a bunch.
    January 22nd, 2010 at 12:18pm
  • Derpina.

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    I was in a Synyster mood so did a little story search. And look at what I found! A diamond in the rough :). I'm looking forward to more.
    January 22nd, 2010 at 11:32am
  • cardiotoxicity

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    Ah, I love this so much! The way you've characterized the characters (i guess you could say that? xD) it's just so believable but you do it in your own way they're kind of like //your characters if you know what I mean... you give them actual personalities and make them your own, not just a typically 'all rockstars are wankers' cliche dross that is impossible to read.

    I love it. You, you are of legend my friend ;D
    January 20th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • Freak Out

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    well, as of right now, its interesting enough that i want to stick around. so update soon.
    =]
    January 19th, 2010 at 05:50pm
  • dinugget

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    Zacky is cute
    I loved it:)
    Update
    January 19th, 2010 at 12:09pm
  • dinugget

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    OMG
    Love<3
    January 15th, 2010 at 05:30pm
  • Sweet Vengeance

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    I really enjoyed this first chapter. Keeps me wanting more.
    January 9th, 2010 at 03:11am
  • cardiotoxicity

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    I'm intrigued.

    I think you portray their crumbling relationship rather well. The dialogue is really believable. The summary holds just enough information, but it's bordering on giving away a little too much if you know what I mean. But it gives an insight to the story so it's up to you whether you want to do something with that.

    I'd love to read more.
    January 9th, 2010 at 12:54am