I really enjoyed the chapter. It was so sweet and I can't help but to love the ending with Ben and Brian, it was just the cutest thing ever. :) I'm exited for the next chapter, please update soon.
You're very welcome, dear. It's good to know that you weren't offended by my comment. I know that I wasn't being harsh, nor did I intend to, because I'm not one to criticize, but I just felt that you were holding back as a writer. I'm passionate about the art of writing, and I've read your work, which I love, and I just knew that you were capable of far more than what you'd written. You have class and taste, so don't be afraid of what other people think. And I'm very excited to see what you can do with a love scene in the sequel, which I'm looking forward to just as much.
there's gonna be a sequel? OMG ... good news for me :) girl, i have to say it, im your number one fan :) I pretty much look your account every fucking day to see the updates... just love your stories :)
Honestly, I have to admit that I was disappointed that there wasn't a sex scene, but I understand your wanting to be tasteful. I'm not a huge fan of sloppy, disgusting sex scenes, which many people seem to be quite fond of on this site, but I do love the sophisticated sex scene, though. I assumed with how well you write that you would be very capable of writing a very touching, romantic first time between Erin and Brian, but your choices are your own. Either way, I'll never stop reading this story.
love the story, you're an amazing writter, i'll never get tired of telling you... :) Erin is so sweet and Brian uff.. no words to express anything about him. Congrats for your good work can't wait for the next part
keep up the good writing :D
hope you update soon again
xoxo