Shattering Crystals - Comments

i already like the rewrite better. ahha.

Chapter 29: I KNEW something romantic was going to happen! That's why you liked it so much!! It was so cool. I'm confused, but so cool!

Chapter 16: Make a character page if you haven't already, love.

Chapter 14: Oh, yes she did make a baad mistake... Love ya bufl <3

You better be getting that sequel(sp?) Going!! This was an amazing story! I was mad when it ended!!! Please please don't make me wait to read the next one!!!

1. Did she do what you thought she would?
Well, duh. I know you Dana. You never go with happy endings.

2. Is this the last time you will see Connor?
No. We'll see him again. Maybe not for awhile, but you can't just cross him out of the whole story. I mean, he's like one of the major characters, and Dana has a super special bond with him. It would be wrong to break that.

3. Excited for the sequel?
This is only *one of my* favorite Mibba stories. What do you think?

uh DUUUH. <3

1. She did what i thought she would
2. I don't think it'll be the last time we see Conner but that's only cause you asked the question
3. yes.

1. No. NONONONONONO N O .
2. Nope.
3. Uh DUH.

omg i love this story!

1. Yes, I did.
2. I don't know</3 It's soo confusingx.x
3. She wants to stay, but it said her heart was breaking? She knows what she has to do..

i didnt see that comming. she needs to tell lynda that wessley has been cheating on her and then leave him behindonm earth forever

Agh Jscott!!!! I cant believe she is pregnant and yes! A bonus chapter would be great

NOOO DO NOT GET SICK. I was sick today too, but that was just because I had a nasty Mexican burger *shuddershudder* haha :P ANYWAY. I liked that chapter a lot :) The details were good (for you, at least *wink*) and I liked how you showed the personalities of them a bit more. AND I liked how you showed Dana's changes into Diana, and showed more of her and Conner (who are ADORABUBBLE, by the way). Overall, job well done ;)

DUDE. THIS. WAS. EPIC.

first of all, dana and connor are adorable. cody is disgusting "unless you want me to puke on you"... wthg!?pgihj!?

and lorraine needs to have her child.

that is all.

1. CUTTERRRR -cough.
2. Yes, I mean she is old right?
3. Uhm, death?o-o Losing her old life?

HA. I WAS THE FIRST TO COMMENT ON THE NEW CHAPTER THIS TIME. SUCK IT. :P

ily danaa <3

1. What is wrong with Lynda?
She has pneumonia and she will DIE!! *evil laughter* jk. I think, knowing you Dana, that it might have something to do with her magic and will provide a complicated but awesome twist to the plot of the whole story... yup that sums it up.

2. Do you think Marigold made the right decision?
Yeah, I do. If they brought Teena against her will or something, then she would have been depressed and moody and would have jumped off a cliff or something. And none of us want that to happen, now do we? So yeah, good choice.

3. What price does Dana pay for beauty?
She's miserable for the rest of her life. Duh. *kind of going along the lines of one of the drabbles you wrote... just saying*

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Okay, since we're obviously failing at getting together, I'm editing part of this right now. So ha. (And did you end up translating my essay ^^?)

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Today's outfit is a pink floral print tank top and a denim mini skirt. Not the first thing I would choose, but not terrible either. (Nothing grammatically incorrect, but it sounds kinda weird to me.)

I stop and smile at myself in the mirror, for once liking what I see. (Missing the "s")

But notw I have the smile of a supermodel. (Not = now?)

This is a face to die for. That is a definite truth. And I had done nearly nothing to get it. Feels so good, but feels so wrong. (Another one that could be phrased better)

My smile turns into a frown as I remember that everything comes with a price. (I know what it means and I know what it's leading to but CLICHE CLICHE CLICHE CLICHE. Just saying.)

***Donc, du rien. Typoooo :P

"I realized that I don't speak a lot. Want to be heard, but too afraid to speak up. Or maybe I just don't think my opinion matters. Who am I?"

Tres cliche, mon amie. Je vais écrire cet essai tout en français. Afin ha. Utiliser un traducteur. De toute façon, j'ai pensé qu'il était assez bon, mais vous pouvez essayer de décrire comment Dana se sent un peu plus, et peut-être donner un plus à jour la description physique. Je veux dire, nous savons qu'elle est différente maintenant, mais nous ne savons pas à quoi elle ressemble, vous savez? Et aussi, vous commencez à poil sur les clichés, donc gardez cela à vérifier un peu ;) haha ET. Vous utilisez encore un tas d'ellipses. Donc ha. Ce n'est pas seulement moi. :P

Et qui est mon deuxième essai magnifique de la journée. Donc, vous êtes les bienvenus. Et au revoir.

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Haha jk not the end yet. But did you like the french? Use google translate ;D

1. Do you think Diana is as perfect as she is said to be?
I think she looks perfect physically, but she really isn't completely perfect, you know?

2. What do you think will happen to Lorraine's baby?
I can't answer that because I already know :P

3. What are they going to do about Teena?
I say they just bag and gag her and keep her knocked out until they're back on Crystallaria. :)

1. What would you say if it actually was all a dream?
You're kidding. If this was a dream I would LAUGH and LAUGH and LAUGH. Then I'd cry. It'd be like ending Harry Potter with "And they all lived happily ever after...jk Harry woke up and he's still sleeping in a cupboard under the stairs." I mean really. Who does that? But if you do that for SC... I'd probably laugh, and not cry. It'd be hilaaarious.

2. Are you wondering why Dean is rooming with the girls?
No. I know why he's rooming with the girls. He's more at home with them. He's too nervous around the guys. Because DEAN IS GAY. *duhDUHduh* haha :P But I wasn't actually wondering about it... It would be weird if juhscott was rooming with the girls, but Dean? Nawh, he's no pimp.

3. What do you think about Lorraine's situation?
She had it coming.

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And that was my essay <3