Sweet Sacrifice: First Year - Comments

  • white rabbit.

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    I think this may be one occasion where the hat is wrong. I wanted to create a character who could be placed in nearly any house, and I hope I've succeeded in doing that. But for the story, she kind of had to be placed in Slytherin.

    I'm glad you enjoyed it (:
    March 1st, 2008 at 12:02pm
  • The Lovecraft

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    New reader here. Wow
    It's a great story, you're an excellent writer, and, to be quite honest I love the fact that there are Evanescence references.:)
    I've subscribed, and read all the chapters. Wonderful.
    I love Macula. She's witty, sarcastic, all the good stuff.
    I'm a little bit uneasy with her sorting though. Slytherin doesn't seem to fit her. Has the hat ever been wrong?
    Anyhow... I can't wait for the next update!:D
    February 29th, 2008 at 05:47pm
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    (:
    Thank youuu
    I'm going to try and update this as soon as i can xx
    February 26th, 2008 at 12:35am
  • dreamboat.

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    GAAAAH
    i didnt realize how much i love this story
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    ahaha
    i do love it
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    its amaaazzzziiinnnggg
    more soon?
    February 25th, 2008 at 10:47pm
  • white rabbit.

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    Thanks, again. I'll go and correct that now (and while I'm at it, I'll change the Ivor/Igor thing too.)

    I'm nearly done with chapter three, too.
    October 25th, 2007 at 05:44am
  • Break the Silence

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    Okay, first of all I loved the second chapter! Nice use of quote from PS (Draco's riff-raff remark).

    [one mistake I nodticed (not a big deal at all):
    “Okay,” Millicent said, depositing her sweets onto the seat, “I’m going to go and find Neville. Coming, Hermione?”

    Macula spoke, not Millicent.] sorry I can be a really annoying perfectionist, I just figured I'd tell you though.

    Thanks again for changing the layout.

    ~adriana
    October 25th, 2007 at 04:16am
  • white rabbit.

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    =] Thanks, again. I'm working on chapter three as I speak. :]
    October 23rd, 2007 at 06:10am
  • dreamboat.

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    i LOVED that
    :O

    this is amazing
    <3

    Smiley
    October 23rd, 2007 at 05:17am
  • white rabbit.

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    :] tank oo <3
    October 20th, 2007 at 12:27am
  • w1nter

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    love it...
    update soon yarxx ^^
    October 19th, 2007 at 11:01pm
  • white rabbit.

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    :] Thanks <3
    I'm really pleased that people are liking this.
    I'm working on the second part right now :]
    October 17th, 2007 at 01:03am
  • dreamboat.

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    i REALLY like this
    : D

    Smiley
    October 16th, 2007 at 06:31am
  • white rabbit.

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    Thanks so much. This is really encouraging. I was a bit nervous about putting this one on.
    & I'll correct that. I was sure I'd spelt Karkaroff's name wrong somewhere LOL.

    <3
    October 16th, 2007 at 12:20am
  • Break the Silence

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    oh my god! i love this. all the description, attention to detail! amazing! please keep writing!!! *subscribes*
    1 thing though: you misspelled karkaroff's name: it's igor not ivor. but this is one of the best things i've seen on here! i love the harry potter universe, and you're doing it justice. :)

    i'm a big ev fan too. nice title.

    "it's true, we're all a little insane,
    but it's so clear, now that i am unchained
    fear is only our minds, taking all over all the time
    fear is only in our minds, but it's taking over all the time..."
    October 16th, 2007 at 12:07am
  • white rabbit.

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    :] thanks <3
    I'll be trying to update sometime soon xx
    October 15th, 2007 at 11:40pm
  • w1nter

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    nice one...
    update soon?!
    i like to know what is going to happen between draco and macula...
    interesting pair though ^^
    October 15th, 2007 at 10:47pm