Torpidity - Comments

I love this. I mean Axel and Roxas in Wonderland? Amazing.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
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This is very good. I'm writing a Kingdom hearts story too. It's a love story about a nobody girl named Xiaa and she helps the nobodies collect hearts. She falls in love with Demyx. The two are partners on missions which only increases their love. I might put it on Mibba and I might not. Well anyway loved your story.

I love the idea of this story. Axel and Roxas in Wonderland? Yes please!
This Chapter is well written, and I love the descriptions. I like that Axel's personality fits that of the Hatter (Well, sort of), and how clueless and confused Roxas is.
The explanation that Axel and Roxas weren't born in Wonderland was brilliant, and Roxas still was confused. xD
I like that Axel told him not to question everything, and to just go with the flow. It seems very Axel of him.
I also loved the cliffhanger at the end, and can't wait for Chapter Two.