Ifelt that it was a good piece overall. I liked the POV of the baby in the first part. You followed the same theme and feel through the whole story which is good because it wasn't just some piece of junk. You had good grammer which is very important because people shouldn't have to sit there for two hours working out your first paragraph. So well done and you get a thumbs up from me! = )
September 30th, 2010 at 05:52pm