According to Him - Comments

normally i don't like P-Kane but this because I'm reading everything i decided that I hard to read your Kane stories too. I'm happy i did because this is such a touchy subject for me and i really connected with it because I'm a sucker for happy endings :)

"Oh Kara." She pulled me up and into a tight motherly hug, placing a kiss on my cheek. "I always hoped it would be him."
"Me too, mom. Me too." - - YEAH for characters with good moms who are actually happy for their children when they are in love and engaged!

"No, you need to get out of this relationship. She is boring as hell, and you could have any girl in Chicago, yet, you found her?" He asked, another mocking laugh spurting from his lips. - - I think you chose a pretty appropriate name for this guy.

The second I was out of his way, Patrick swung, clipping The Prick right in his jaw, making him fall to the concrete like a piano. He then proceeded to lean down, grabbing the collar of his shirt and snapping at him,"get the fuck out of here." YEAH PATRICK - finally someone who needs a good punch in the face gets one!

Bravo on the wedding. Really well done. I am a complete fail at weddings so I never write them and I am always in awe when someone else does it.

it was to distract me from the word pregnant, spelled out across a stick that I had peed on 9 minutes before this moment. - - YES!!!! Kaner babies. Not exactly Zach babies, but a close second.

going to have a baby!?" He exclaimed, scooping me up and laying me down on the couch. I giggled and nodded, YEAH! for loving husbands who want babies!

Holy Shit. going into labor during a hockey game. Only Patrick Kane's kid would do that to his/her mom.

"Get me drugs, now." I told him very sternly through my gritted teeth. "I can't do it without the drugs." - - OK this whole labor thing freaks me out. give her drugs!!!!

"Blake Elizabeth Kane." - Love the name.

Awwww Happy stories. I love your happy love stories! So sweet the three of them snuggled together like that!

Love the story.
Love the happiness.
So good.

"Did you make me dinner?" He asked, bluntly, smiling down at her as she shook her head yes.
Ahahaha, get right to the point there, Pattycakes.

"Impossible," he grinned at me as we walked to the dinning room where my mom was setting out dinner.
I truly believe that it IS impossible for him to behave.

And I'm glad I finally get to meet the prick who was stupid enough to let her go. I'm going to marry her. So thank you for being an absolute dumbass." Patrick smirked at him, snorting as he looked The Prick up and down, seeing how he had a solid pack of muscle and The Prick was all talk.
Damn right!

"Because you're my MOH. And if you don't pick your game up, you're being demoted for Jess," I told her, pointing to the other brunette in the room with me who was obviously texting her boyfriend Jonathan Toews.
"Jonny said Kaner is tweaking," Jess giggled, showing my the message.
Awww yeah, favorite part right there!

"We're going to have a baby!?" He exclaimed, scooping me up and laying me down on the couch.
Now that is the ideal reaction...if only all men were that excited.

"That doesn't matter. I'm about to be a dad!" He exclaimed, a huge grin on his face as he helped me form the car.
Awwwww.

This was soooo good, Brianna.
So good.
<333 you

Loooooooooooooooove this story, Its wonderful how he seemed like a playa in the beginning and became a dad at the end. Im not a fan of his, however, Im a huge fan of this story!!!!!!

Also love the name you picked. =)

"Did you make me dinner?" He asked, bluntly, smiling down at her as she shook her head yes.
typical boy lol

"Shut the fuck up. You have absolutely no idea how incredible Kara is. She is everything any smart guy would want in a moron. And I'm glad I finally get to meet the prick who was stupid enough to let her go. I'm going to marry her. So thank you for being an absolute dumbass." Patrick smirked at him, snorting as he looked The Prick up and down, seeing how he had a solid pack of muscle and The Prick was all talk.
this is me swooning hardcore *SWOOOON* you tell him pkane!

"I can't believe you're getting married," Brianna sobbed dramatically, throwing herself onto the love seat that was located in my changing room. I rolled my eyes at her, snapping my fingers and telling her to get up here.
pull yourself together brianna! hahaha

We reached the alter, my dad turning me and giving me a tight squeeze. "I love you, pumpkin."
this is me tearing up <333

"Spoil her, that's what she deserves."
yes, it is XP

I ran my hands over my swollen belly, looking over at Brianna who was making faces at her and Brent's three month old. She was adorable and I only hoped my baby would look like that, girl or boy, I wanted a happy baby.
awww i love babies! especially happy babies!! =P as if you didn't know!

"That doesn't matter. I'm about to be a dad!" He exclaimed, a huge grin on his face as he helped me form the car
why is pkane so cute? omgosh i just absolutely adore him

"Mr. and Mrs. Kane, I present to you, Baby Kane, 8 pounds 10 oz. Ten fingers, ten toes, and healthy as can be," the nurse murmured, handing the little girl to me.
BABY KANE!!! *dies!!!!* so happy!!!

omgosh i LOVED this story so darn much it should be a crime!! it was so amazing and i'm SO happy you wrote it for me!! <333
pkane was so perfect adn you are just the BEST writer!
i'm so happy we decided to do this trade!
Love you BOO! <333

Noooooooo! It's can't ennnnnnnnnnnd. It was so cute and wonderful and emotional.
It should be a never ending story.

& i enjoy the story :)
i forgot to add that last tid bit

I just noticed this story.

1. I've been listening to the song on repeat for the past 20 minutes.
2. I ADOOOOORREEEEE P. Kane ! he sounds like sucha sweetie.
3. the ring you chose .. gorgeous.

Ohhhhh so adorable my dear.
I really wish PK was in real life the way you write him..
Obviously we know he's not, but, whatever.
This is precious and I love the way he proposed, even after losing the game.
(which will NOT happen, kthanks!)
Update soon?

This is beyond cute!!! I love it.

The image of Pat all upset over losing the gold made my heart break. Hopefully that doesn't happen in a few weeks and he'll have a smile on his face and a gold medal around his neck.

The way he propsed was breath taking. I awwed so many times.

mmmm kay, i just want to say that i am in love with this story!!
i was completely squealing the whole time, it was just WAY too cute
i love that you've made patrick into this sweet, romantic rather than the cocky jerk everyone always does. i honestly believe the he is a sweetheart deep down inside.

i'm really hoping that your olympic predictions are wrong, and USA wins the gold (:

but i have to ask, how int he world did you get a picture of MY wedding ring??? hmm?? hahaha i completely swooned when he got down on one knee (: too cute for words!!

OK let me just say that I can totally get used to this lovey-dovey sweet sensitive Patrick Kane. Kara's a lucky woman.

"Oh! This is pretty?!" I asked Patrick, holding up a black V neck top to my boyfriend who was leaning against the wall next to the rack.
"Does it show cleavage?" He asked me, raising an eyebrow.
"Would you like me to try it on, Casanova?" All that sweetness and he's a horny little man too! Rawr!!!

I smiled as I made my way to him with all my bags, approaching him and studying the way he lazily sat on the bench, his eyes scanning the horizon. He had one arm thrown over the back of the bench, his legs spread wide, and looking so delicious, like he popped out of a magazine meant to boost estrogen in a woman. hahahaha. Boost estrogen in a woman. It's his purpose in life.

a hat cover his eyes and his Silver medal in his jacket pocket, the cloth it hung on draping out of his pocket. He walked over to me, not saying a word just dropping his hockey bag and pulling me into a hug. I pursed my lips as he squeezed me tight, his shoulders shaking just slightly as he cried. - - Poor Patty! Awwwwww

I love you, every single part of you. Your personality is incredible, your smile takes my breath away, and hearing your voice will instantly brighten my day no matter how bad it is. I never, ever thought I would be content being with one person for the rest of my life, but you change all of that. You changed my mind. I want you for by my side or nobody at all. So, Kara, will you marry me? YES!!!!! I knew he was going to propose. Go Kara!

Nice ring Kara. Go with the diamond wedding band. :D

Love happy fun stories. Your making me smile Brianna!

I knew it!
I just had this feeling that when he told her he had some shopping to do by himself that he would be going shopping for some very expensive jewelery that goes around one's finger when they're engaged.
Damn, I'm so good.
They are so precious.
More soon. <3

We can go shopping, eat some lunch, and then camp out at the hotel for some other extra curricular activities," he suggested, his teeth nipping at the skin on my collar bone.
rawr, yes we can! i'm an excellent camper!

I looked into his eyes, the blue specks in them more pronounced as he looked down at me. His eyes were only this beautiful when he looked at me, or so Brianna had said
*dreamy sigh*

I sighed and turned from my moppy headed boyfriend, and stepping into the steel contraption
i love that mop so much i should join a support group.

Does it show cleavage?" He asked me, raising an eyebrow.
typical boy! boobies!

Do you really want me to stop?" He asked, pulling away his eyes holding an amused glint.
NOPE I REALLY DON'T! PLEASE CONTINUE!

I pursed my lips as he squeezed me tight, his shoulders shaking just slightly as he cried. I was surprised by the showing of his emotions in such a public place and way, but I held him and rubbed his back until he was okay again.
aww my poor baby! *tears* let kara make you feel all better <33 this better not be a preview of things to come!!

"I understand. I mean it's really soon-"

I leaned down, placing a hard kiss on his lips to get him to stop talking.
stupid boy! stop talking and let me say yes!!!

OMGOSH
*DREAMIEST SIGH EVARRR*
loved it so darn much! i'm gonna be mrs. kane and have his mophead babies!
YAYYAYAYAY. we are so cool! i can't even believe it!!!
<3333333333333333333333

Adorable.
You're good at writing fluff, my dear.
"Okay. But only because I've always wanted to have sex with an Olympian," I teased him, watching as his eyes narrowed like he was going to pounce.
Ahahaha, best line ever.
More soon. <3

One of the first things I did as a newly single girl, was grab a couple of tickets for a Hawks game, - - Just what all newly single girls should do! (Seriously!)

a nice way to take a shot at The Prick, because he hated hockey, another reason we never would have worked out. - - Yeah I totally get this statement.

wondering if it was a good or bad thing that I was still wearing my Kane shirt. I decided it was good as Patrick's eyes flicked over me again, just like during warm ups, except this time, they didn't move away. I gulped as he moved towards me, his mouth tilted in that infamous smirk that did crazy things to girls like me. - - That smirk really does do crazy things to girls (me too Kara!)

"Kara, where's your boyfriend?" He asked, his hand coming to rest on my knee. I looked down at it, my leg bursting into flames as a hot wave of lust rushed over my body at the simple gesture. - - So Clever Kaner LOL

But as much as I wanted to bang Patrick Kane tonight; Aww Come On! Do it!

He spoiled me. He showered me with love and affection, making sure he told me how beautiful I was and how much he cared about me every day. He bought me roses on random days, gave me back rubs - Marry him Kara!!!!

"I'm spoiled just by having you in my life," he murmured to me, his lips brushing against my forehead lovingly.
"You're such a charmer." I rolled my eyes at him, but secretly, my heart was beating ten times faster from the sweetness of his words. Aww Patrick! You smooth talker!

"Okay. But only because I've always wanted to have sex with an Olympian," I teased him, watching as his eyes narrowed like he was going to pounce. - - That excuse works for me!

Love sweet happy Kaner! Great story (as always) I'm looking forward to more. Plus I'm wondering if you'll really hold this to a couple of chapters. ;-)

Ahhhhh omg! My first raction was wanting to kill you...
because i'm borderline obsessed with this song and i was listening to it the other day in the car trying to figure out a story to go along with it. but i never would have written it, so i guesssssssss i won't have to kill you (:
justtttt kidddding!
but obviously, i love me some patty, he's just freaking precious as always.
and i love that she's a hawks fan and got with pk. luckkkkky woman.
anyway, i can't wait to see where it goes and for more :D
update soon?
<333

"Then he won't care that I'm about to ask you to dance?" He asked me, pulling me into a standing position and tugging me onto the dance floor.
rawr, i could think of a few other positions we could get ourselves into ;D

Silence fell over us as we both glanced around the bar, searching for the other people we came with. My mouth dropped open when I saw Brianna and Brent, already attached at the lips, his hands roaming over my best friends body in a not so subtle way.
what a HOEEE! ew, hehe.

urning back to the baby faced boy who was still studying me.
i love me some baby faced boy.

"Kara, Baby! Come here!" My boyfriend exclaimed, his boyish laugh following as he ran down the hallway to our bedroom, diving onto the bed and not giving me a chance to actually meet him like he had called.
best mental image EVER! lol, him running around like it's christmas morning! love it!!

he curled up in Patrick's lap as he softly stroked her fur, causing the black and white feline to purr and flick her tail against his chest.
aww!! i LOVE kitties! and he's the daddy to my baby! <33333 *squeal!!*

Patrick swiveled his eyebrows at me as the fabric of my shirt came up, exposing part of my mid-drift.
that made me crack up lol, swiveled his eyebrows, pounce!

"Well then I guess I'm going to have to bring my best game," he growled at me, his teeth snapping playfully.
rawr, you better! hehe

OHMYGOSH I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS I SIMPLY CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!
EEK! he's so cute and sweet and baby face and kitty and pkane!!
omgosh, LOVE it love love love! <333
love you boo!