Oookay I can't believe no one has commented on this yet.
I felt like I was reading a book. What I mean by this is that your words were chosen so precisely and the flow of the whole thing was just right. It felt really professionally done and well written as a whole.
I like the story, the plot. I really liked how it was a re-telling as opposed to it happening while we read. The whole 'soul stealer' thing was really neat, I enjoyed that part and I like the idea of it. Her carbon eyes... spooky!
But yeah I really enjoyed reading this and thought it was really original so kudos to you for that!
I felt like I was reading a book. What I mean by this is that your words were chosen so precisely and the flow of the whole thing was just right. It felt really professionally done and well written as a whole.
I like the story, the plot. I really liked how it was a re-telling as opposed to it happening while we read. The whole 'soul stealer' thing was really neat, I enjoyed that part and I like the idea of it. Her carbon eyes... spooky!
But yeah I really enjoyed reading this and thought it was really original so kudos to you for that!