I think this is a really good story. It was very funny in places, well done :)
January 27th, 2007 at 05:46pm
That was really, really powerful.
Each word you used was potent enough to push it's way past the bullshit in my brain + mean something to me.
I liked that.
I just wished you had progressed a bit more, ya know ??
You could even make that into a story.
S'good.