One Heart - Comments

I'm not crying, you're crying.

wow ive read the prequel and this. i know its completed, but damn! i have loved everybit of it! its made me cry and made me laugh hard out, but ive really enjoyed it!

Wow awesome, I had tears in my eyes, really great story..

Once again I can honestly say you brought me to tears. This chapter and this story in general was amazing! I really loved reading all 96 drama-filled chapters with Nat and Brian. I can't think of anything else that I would've wanted to do instead. So you don't need to thank us, WE should thank YOU for writing this fantastic story. You are an amazingly wonderful and fantastic writer. Please keep writing so that I can continue to have cry-fests at my computer, but also have a great story to read as well. I truly enjoy reading your stories. Its rare that I find a writer that can bring my to tears with their stories, so props to you :) Keep it up! I look forward to your next story! ;)

Omg when I read the last chapter I was in the middle of getting a haircut and had to hold back the strongest urge to cry :'(
I LOVED IT. though I can't believe it's over, but it did have a good run :)

This story was AMAZING!! I cry at the end. I had a friend who got lukaemia too, but he made a full recovery and is doing well. I re-read your ending 3 times. I can't help but think of three of my other friends who all lost their moms to cancer. STUPID CANCER NEEDS TO DIE!!!
BTW- to make you feel special, this is the first story on Mibba that has made me cry. It shows how good you are at expressing your feelings in your wrighting and making the readers feel it too.

That was so beautifully well written, I had tears in my eyes. Truly, a wonderful story that caught the essence of what living/ dealing with Leukemia is really like (not just for the victim, but their friends and loved ones as well). To be honest, I hated the first ending...but I guess that it because Nat "lived" after waiting a long time to get treatment and one of my closest friends died shortly after a year of chemo (and she acted on treatment right away). To me, the second ending is more fitting (maybe because I am a little biased) and more comforting because all you really hear about now is success rates. You don't get to hear stories of people who did not win the fight- of their friends who stood beside them every step of the way. So, kudos. It was a truly remarkable story.

=D Bree

im not going to lie. i cried like a baby reading this chapter...
i loved it :)

it's heart warming and sad.

Oh my gosh. I can honestly say you brought me to tears with this chapter. I definitely like the happier ending better simply because its happy and I like happy endings but this one even though it was sadder was more realistic. I know that Brian will take great care of the kids. He wouldn't let Nat down like that. Rae's goodbye was the thing that started the waterworks. It was so sweet and kid-like. I can't imagine how she would ever accept it but she has to I guess. This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here ever. You are an amazing writer and I'm so glad I ran across your stories. I can't wait to see the epilogue. Its sad to see this end but it had a good run and something just as excellent will take its place once you get more writing time. :)

So well done. I take my hat off to you. (That's what you do in theater, right? lol I don't know.)

Of course not :)

That is the original ending anyway, so if you are horrible for choosing it then I must be horrible too, for writing it in the first place.

Is it horrible that I would choose the second ending?

Aww, thank you ^^

I have considered doing another sequel/oneshot just to show what happens to the rest of the guys, but I'm kind of undecided whether I actually want to post it. Right now, it's more of just something I'm adding bits to here and there at the moment, so it may never surface as an actual full story- I don't know.

Awww!! It's over?? Well almost since you have a few more extra chapters to go...I'm not sure how I feel about this. A little sad but also happy because of what happened.

Nat's in the clear!!!! She beat it! YAY!!!! I'm so so happy for her and Brian and Rae and Sammy and just everyone!!! Finally she gets to be fully and completely happy! :) She gets unlimited time with her husband and kids and who knows...if she stays in remission she might even get to go through all the boy drama with Rae when she gets older. Brian should LOOOOVE that stage :P I'm so incredibly happy with this story. It was really really good all the way through even if it made me cry at parts.

Do we get to find out about the rest of the group? Like did Chloe and Zacky have their baby? And did anyone else have kids in these past two years? Just curious.

I love it!! This whole story has been fabulous and I can't wait to read the last few extra chapters! You're an amazing writer! :D

I'm so happy that she is now awake. I'm a little worried about the fact that she doesn't remember being out for a week and that Brians doesn't want to tell her but I get his reasoning. We definitely don't need her freaking out and going into cardiac arrest again. That would not be good. I'm so extremely happy that she is going to do the treatment! :D Hopefully it will work and she and Brian can have a long happy life with their kids, because she is right....how can she leave Sammy with Brian? haha! They just need to be the perfect little family. Update soon!

Oh and btw, you are definitely not disappointing me at all and I would probably still love the story even with the original plan you had. Just so you know. :)

Yes, hypothermia is used as a treatment (in some hospitals) for cardiac arrest survivors, since if the body is chilled to a lower temperature then the organs aren't fighting over themselves as much for oxygen, because much less is needed when the body is colder (kind of like survival instincts in arctic conditions). I researched it on google- or rather I cam across it, and decided to incorperate it here :)

Dang! Talk about dramatic. I seriously thought that Nat was going to die. Is hypothermia really a treatment for post cardiac-arrest victims? I've never heard of it being used for that before. This was really good, I'm glad the baby is okay. I can't wait for the next update. And also for Nat to meet Sammy. :)

Nah, making that italics doesn't mean anything, I just have a habit of making stuff that are names of things into them (like always making the band names italics).

I'm trying to get back to my normal updating pace now, since I'm nearing the end of making my altercations, which hopefully will please everyone out there towards where this story is heading :)

I'll be heading over to read and comment on your story now as well =D

Well I can handle the lack of updates if it will make the story longer cuz I'm definitely not ready to see it end just yet. As for this chapter comment..

Holy mushrooms you had me so worried there and I still am with Nat and all. I don't know how Brian is going through it and still surviving. He's a trooper but that freakout on the nurse and doctors was totally appropriate. I mean his wife is being shocked back to life. Hello!!! That calls for a freakout I'd think. And what was with 'cardiac arrest' being italicized the whole time? Am I supposed to pick up on some hidden clue there or something? If so I'm really slow and didn't get it. :P

Aww!! Brian names their son Sammy for Nat!! Saw that one coming but its sweet and cute and I totally can see why he did it. Poor Jimmy!! He's so sad to see his best friend go through this and I'm sad to see him sad. :( I have to say though that Zacky and Brian's brief talk at the end there was super sweet. Best friends are there forever and know when you need to let it out. Zacky's a good friend :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep it up!

Oh and I updated "You're Not Alone" if you didn't know that. Just letting you know :D

I KNEW something like that was going to happen! I could just feel it in my bones. But I'm glad she seems relatively okay. I know we haven't learned much about how she really is but I'm glad that she is at least awake now and can see her beautiful little boy. And Brian is just too cute...waiting to name him. Aww!! I could just kiss him ;) I can't wait to see what happens. I feel the end is near but that end better not be with Nat dying! Promise me its not please.

Update soon!