One Heart - Comments

I guess that is a consolation. Gives me hope at least. I mean I don't think anything will be wrong with the baby, just with Nat and those thoughts I don't like. But I know you won't let anything slip on that front. :(

Brian was being a tad overprotective in this chapter. I mean I understand it but if Nat said she didn't need to go to the hospital he should've just fretted to himself and not driven Nat off to go home alone cuz typical me is thinking the worst now. I don't like it when Nat is alone. It makes me uneasy. Anything can happen and I don't like that. However, i can't wait to meet Dylan/Sammy. I'm insanely curious to know which name they choose! :) Update soon!

Ha ha ha ha ha. Wants to come play outside with the grownups. I think that is the most creative way to tell someone you're in labor that I have ever heard. Its great! :) I'm so excited for Sam/Dylan to be born! Keep up the good work! :) This chapter was awesome!

If it's any consolation I did approximate Rae as being born at around the same time (seven and a half months) and she turned out perfectly fine :)

That was super sweet of Brian to give Nat his coat. Not that he wouldn't have ever, but I'm just saying. I'm also glad that Chloe wasn't mad at Nat for not telling her. Not that I thought she would be. I just didn't see that happening. But I don't know if I'm a fan of Nat having the baby early :S I guess what happens happens. She just better not die. That's all I'm saying.

Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :)

Awwwww! I actually forgot about the new baby for a little while there. Oops! I really liked this one though. I'm glad Brian knows now. Good job :)

This was a cute and sad chapter. I always tear up when she goes to visit her parents' graves. That's just so sad. I know she would wish that they were there with her to see all that she's become. But I'm so happy that Brian now knows about the baby. I wonder what they will name him....hm...I'm kinda more towards Dylan myself but I'm sure they were decide on a completely different name. haha! But Zachary as a middle name is sweet. I'm not sure I like the reasoning behind it but eh I think that can be gotten over. But Nat does have a good point at the end. When you are in love like they are you don't realize how much you give to the other person in discussions. That's part of what makes it sweet...to me. I can't wait to find out what else is coming :D I'm anxious to see. Thanks for letting us get a rough idea of how far along she is :)

Well I guess if shouting doesn't work you'll have to move to more drastic measures. hehe :D

If shouting at my internet connection made it work, then it wouldn't have slowed down in the first place =D

Aww! Now that is a Christmas to remember! i cannot imagine putting all that together. That would be insane. haha! Plus I'm not that coordinated or organized so all the more to Nat for doing it. I loved how they ganged up on Matt. Too hilarious! Especially when Rae did it and he couldn't do anything back. Nice :) I can't wait to find out more about the baby and such. Oh and Nat doesn't need to get a cold. I swear if you make her get a cold I will not be very happy with you. lol. Lastly, I can imagine just what Brian's present is and I think he's a-liking it ;) Can't wait for more! Tell you internet to work properly or bad things will befall it. hehe.

this is the best story i've read in a while. [:
i love it. hope you update soon. :D

Now what would be a complete twist is when the baby IS born, both of them, SHE LIVES. now that would be an ending.

It was thrown in there so I don't think anyone expected this little bit- unless they were psychic or something. As for how far along she is, you get to find out in another chapter... I can't remember which one but in the next few I do believe :)

As for Chloe and Zacky it had to happen, I can't let them go without their happy family ending :)

HOLY EFFING CRAP!!!!!!!! I did NOT see that one coming AT.ALL. Now you know I'm going to beg you to let her carry the baby to term and not die and all that jazz. So I'll keep it short. PLEASE OH PLEASE LET HER CARRY THE BABY TO TERM AND NOT DIE!!! Her and Brian are so perfect together and she just can't leave him with 2 kids to take care of. That's not fair or happy and i'm a fan of both of those things. Don't make me do the puppy dog face cuz I will. :)

I'm glad that Chloe went through with the wedding and I'm esctatic that they are expecting! After the miscarriage they deserve this bit of happiness. :)

One question....how far along is Nat? Is she far enough along to know the sex of the baby already? If so I'd think she'd be showing by now. Hm...guess I'll just have to wait and see what you've got in store for me. *sigh* waiting...it so sucks. But I guess I make you wait for my story too so its all fair. Oh in case you didn't know I updated 'You're Not Alone' over the weekend.

Excellent chapter! :D

Oooooh man. Did Chloe get cold feet? She can't! She'll break Zacky's heart if she does and consequently runs out on their wedding. I'll be so sad. I really really hope that Nat can find her in time. But I have to say that this theme of a Halloween wedding is pretty awesome :) I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with all of them! Update soon! My fingers are crossed for Chloe to be alright and for her and Zacky to get married!! :D

So...I'm so absolutely ecstatic that Brian found her when he did even though I think he still should've called an ambulance. But I get that nat didn't want it so of course he wouldn't and couldn't do what she didn't want. They are just too perfect for each other. I really really really want things to work out for them. Can you please make that happen for me? I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Screw the box
what is happening to her

Holy Crap!! I'm just gonna start off saying that from the moment I read the chapter title I knew it was gonna be bad! :( Ugh!! What you do to me! I swear I have a heart attack every time you update with all the cliffhanger stuff you do and whatnot! Anywho, Nat needs to like throw the glass or something to get someone's drunk attention in the other room. How could Brian succumb to drinking when he had just said he likes to keep constant vigilance over Nat at all times? He has to know that drinking impairs even him just slightly. *sigh* But I guess he's not perfect no matter how much I want him to be :P I really really really hope that someone finds Nat in time. But I have faith. I mean you said that we find out what else is in the box in later chapters....but you could mean that Brian goes through it after you kill off Nat (which I really don't want you to do)...or you could mean that Nat will be fine and someone will find her. ARGHHHH! You are driving me crazy!!! Please update soon so that I don't completely lose my freaking mind!!

Wait... oh you're right xD

How bad is that, I actually forgot what had happened in my own story then. You're actually right, Chloe did find out.

(Changing my previous answer now, lol)

Basically it's been an 'unwritten' law between the pair of them since they were little that they would always pay a major role in each other's lives, so if Chloe was Nat's maid of honour then naturally, Nat would be Chloe's. However the difference was it is Nat's personality that made her shoulder all the work by herself, since she doesn't want her condition to get her down at all.

She's far too proud/stubborn :)

oh i though that chloe found out about Nat's conditon after Nat passed out at her wedding?? good chapter update soon!! :) xoxJess

I so wanna know what was in that box! I'm thinking like lingerie or something since she said she'd been neglecting other responsibilities specifically dealing with him, but then why would she wear it in front of the other guys. I just don't know. I think that Zacky and Chloe are too adorable even though she was only mentioned in passing. Zacky is just too sweet waning Brian and Nat to play at their wedding. So cute! Again a fabulous chapter! :)

Sounds like you had a lot of fun even if you just went for your friend. That's cool too. But you've gotta admit its the franticness of running through subways and such that makes nights like that so memorable. Good memories to look back on and go 'Remember when...' and then laugh. :) I'm sorry you felt nauseous though. That's never a fun feeling.

And I know you won't tell me the answer to my questions. Its a fate I've learned to accept...somewhat :P You better just post that chapter soon! I can't wait for it, but I can wait for the end of the story. I don't want it to end :(

I'll be anxiously waiting the next chapter :)

Chloe doesn't know Nat's condition, only Jimmy and Brian do, so that's why she didn't hesitate to ask her to be her maid of honour :)

The mosh pits yesterday were... interesting, to say the least. I more or less went to keep my friend company, otherwise she would have had no one to go with. The band we went to see I didn't personally mind, but I wouldn't have cared if I didn't go, regardless of the fact we were basically at the front of everyone (one person in front of me to the barrier).

As for the bands, we went to see A Day To Remember, with In Demise (I think >.>) and Architects supporting. I got squished. Majorly. Plus running through various tube stations to get the train home in time wasn't the best part of my evening, especially when I was running with a nauseous feeling hovering over me like a bad storm cloud.

And no, I will never answer your question about Nat's fate. Well, until I post the chapter that says it :P