yeah, I'm not too good at writing stories...the explanation behind this is that it is a girl dying and for some reason that she had forgotten, one of her dreams was to see pink balloons in the rain. Then I wasn't sure whether I should make her die or not, so I just left it at the end. You're right, it just didn't quite fit together, I wrote most of it on a day when I was feeling poorly and just bascically wrote an alternate life for myself. It isn't my best, but I am trying...
January 31st, 2010 at 11:47pm