In The Trees - Comments

  • KarellyCanDreamToo

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    Dude, this honestly made me shed a tear. You're really good.
    June 17th, 2013 at 09:40am
  • Kiakara17

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    This is a cute story. Very rich in description, it really helps put the setting into the story. I love the plot! To bad this is a one-shot. I normally don't read stories like this one but this really interested me. Keep in mind though, when you are writing paragraphs when a subject shifts, make it a new paragraph, it looks nice and easier to read. Other then that it's a fantastic piece of writing.
    June 6th, 2012 at 01:07am
  • Blue Eyes White Lies

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    That. Was. So. Sweet!
    June 30th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • the redhead's cho

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    That's really sad! I didn't expect that at all I must admit! It was quite a change from what you would normally get. It was a little rough to read in places, but all in all, it was a good read.
    February 27th, 2010 at 08:00am