This is a cute story. Very rich in description, it really helps put the setting into the story. I love the plot! To bad this is a one-shot. I normally don't read stories like this one but this really interested me. Keep in mind though, when you are writing paragraphs when a subject shifts, make it a new paragraph, it looks nice and easier to read. Other then that it's a fantastic piece of writing.
That's really sad! I didn't expect that at all I must admit! It was quite a change from what you would normally get. It was a little rough to read in places, but all in all, it was a good read.