Breaking Their Hold - Comments

  • Jody!

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    i really enjoyed this story. it just like sucked me in and i finished t all in one day, i couldnt stop!:)
    October 20th, 2013 at 10:05am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    I hope you update this story soon. I really enjoy it. :D
    August 11th, 2012 at 08:40am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Loved this <3
    August 7th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • rockstarsNredpants

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    the wait for another update is killing me here. I honestly think this is my favourite story on here, and I'm so anxious for the end. <3
    July 19th, 2012 at 09:21pm
  • maedrinksblood

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    I really enjoy reading this story. It's very detailed and I get antsy thinking about whether they will all be okay. I hope Jimmy and the boys are okay. ]:
    July 6th, 2012 at 03:14am
  • xXxKiss_Of_DeathxXx

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    I have to tell you that I love this story. I kind of wish I had discovered it sooner, so that I could see the story develop from the time you started writing it until now. Then again, I haven't had to wait for the updates that seem to take forever when you find a story that you have really gotten into like I have with this story.

    I actually found you through one of your other stories. Good Girls and Bad Guys. I just love Ronnie(: That story is really good as well, but I have just really gotten into this one. I love Avenged Sevenfold's music too, however I regret to say that I do not know much about them. >.<

    The whole government conspiracy thing is a good plot and it immediately drew me in. I love how your story is original and very detailed. There are three things that will immediately turn me off to an author: 1) If they are really vague in thier descriptions 2) If the plot is unoriginal and overused and 3) If the characters are one dimensional and boring. However, as you have probably guessed, you have passed the test. (:

    I really love the way you write and the whole time as I was reading it, I kept thinking that not only should someone publish your story, but that it would make a good movie as well. If one of those happened, I would definitely read and/or see it.

    You are an amazing writer and I hope you continue to keep writing, because you definitely have a gift. I can't wait to see how this story is going to end, even though I am sad that it is coming to a close. I just hope everything turns out okay and Zacky is able to get better. I dont want him to die. : (

    I have subscribed and I am sorry for my ranting. I just wanted you to know how much I have been enjoying your story. I have been reading it as much as I can since I first found it a couple days ago. Update soon? (:
    May 22nd, 2012 at 03:07am
  • James_Moriarty

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    I HOPE THEY GET THERE IN TIME!
    April 25th, 2012 at 03:36pm
  • FuckNo

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    I liked the chapter, although I am really excited to find out what happens next.

    However, I'm curious as to why all the text in this chapter was bold.
    April 23rd, 2012 at 10:01pm
  • Eat the Rude.

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    I've just found out about this story, and I must say it is interesting.
    April 1st, 2012 at 01:21pm
  • FuckNo

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    I'm so fucking excited!

    So close to saving everyone. ^.^
    March 31st, 2012 at 05:08pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    Ooooh
    but I don't thinks its going to be quite that easy...
    March 31st, 2012 at 04:25pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    Fingers crossed she gets to canada!
    March 16th, 2012 at 07:21pm
  • FuckNo

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    Tears in my eyes! >_< They need to be rescued.
    March 14th, 2012 at 05:21pm
  • FuckNo

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    I really hope they're okay. :(
    March 8th, 2012 at 06:23am
  • James_Moriarty

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    I thought she would freak when she found out about Jimmy
    But she took it surprisingly well
    March 5th, 2012 at 03:15pm
  • FuckNo

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    *hugs Mel* I believe in her! I hope they get there safely. :(
    March 1st, 2012 at 07:08am
  • James_Moriarty

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    I hope that Mel gets to Canada and they all make it out okay
    but for some reason I think its gonna end badly
    February 19th, 2012 at 12:22pm
  • FuckNo

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    Oh god. Jimmy, Matt and Zacky. :(

    Wait, I can't remember where Brian is.

    I hope they all live. >_<
    February 18th, 2012 at 09:34pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    fuck me...
    I hope they escape >:{
    February 8th, 2012 at 12:35pm
  • SpencerG

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *starts sobbing*
    January 22nd, 2012 at 05:34am