Breaking Their Hold - Comments

i really enjoyed this story. it just like sucked me in and i finished t all in one day, i couldnt stop!:)

I hope you update this story soon. I really enjoy it. :D

Loved this <3

the wait for another update is killing me here. I honestly think this is my favourite story on here, and I'm so anxious for the end. <3

I really enjoy reading this story. It's very detailed and I get antsy thinking about whether they will all be okay. I hope Jimmy and the boys are okay. ]:

I have to tell you that I love this story. I kind of wish I had discovered it sooner, so that I could see the story develop from the time you started writing it until now. Then again, I haven't had to wait for the updates that seem to take forever when you find a story that you have really gotten into like I have with this story.

I actually found you through one of your other stories. Good Girls and Bad Guys. I just love Ronnie(: That story is really good as well, but I have just really gotten into this one. I love Avenged Sevenfold's music too, however I regret to say that I do not know much about them. >.<

The whole government conspiracy thing is a good plot and it immediately drew me in. I love how your story is original and very detailed. There are three things that will immediately turn me off to an author: 1) If they are really vague in thier descriptions 2) If the plot is unoriginal and overused and 3) If the characters are one dimensional and boring. However, as you have probably guessed, you have passed the test. (:

I really love the way you write and the whole time as I was reading it, I kept thinking that not only should someone publish your story, but that it would make a good movie as well. If one of those happened, I would definitely read and/or see it.

You are an amazing writer and I hope you continue to keep writing, because you definitely have a gift. I can't wait to see how this story is going to end, even though I am sad that it is coming to a close. I just hope everything turns out okay and Zacky is able to get better. I dont want him to die. : (

I have subscribed and I am sorry for my ranting. I just wanted you to know how much I have been enjoying your story. I have been reading it as much as I can since I first found it a couple days ago. Update soon? (:

I HOPE THEY GET THERE IN TIME!

I liked the chapter, although I am really excited to find out what happens next.

However, I'm curious as to why all the text in this chapter was bold.

I've just found out about this story, and I must say it is interesting.

I'm so fucking excited!

So close to saving everyone. ^.^

Ooooh
but I don't thinks its going to be quite that easy...

Fingers crossed she gets to canada!

Tears in my eyes! >_< They need to be rescued.

I really hope they're okay. :(

I thought she would freak when she found out about Jimmy
But she took it surprisingly well

*hugs Mel* I believe in her! I hope they get there safely. :(

I hope that Mel gets to Canada and they all make it out okay
but for some reason I think its gonna end badly

Oh god. Jimmy, Matt and Zacky. :(

Wait, I can't remember where Brian is.

I hope they all live. >_<

fuck me...
I hope they escape >:{

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *starts sobbing*