August 15th, 2011 at 10:25pm
Breaking Their Hold - Comments
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This is such an amazing story!!! I'm so glad that I found it! Poor zack :) Schlagger should go die!!!! I like Sean he kinda reminds me of that one character in a movie that u want to see more of. I really hope they make it to Canada soon! Anyways this story is amazing, it has made me want to cry so many times. Mainly when Zack was being tortured and Matt got beaten :( i can't wait for more!!! Update soon!!!July 27th, 2011 at 08:41am
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Chapter was called Trust and Deceit. Zacky didn't cave.
Either Pierre or Sean is a traitor.
My money's on Sean though. 'Cause, let's face it, killing a cop isn't exactly what I'd consider the best way to prove you're trustworthy. Especially not when members are willing to murder an innocent little girl for not giving them the information they want.July 27th, 2011 at 05:51am -
So glad you updated this!
*snuggles them*
Gah, I'mg glad they're okay. :3July 20th, 2011 at 06:22am -
I just found this. Please update soon!!!June 16th, 2011 at 06:00am
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I absolutely love this story, it is amazing and different from other stories. I really enjoy reading, so update soon!!February 25th, 2011 at 07:24pm
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Please keep writing this story! I really love how it's so different from most other stories! xFebruary 12th, 2011 at 01:17am
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OMG!! This story is amazing! I think this is one of the best stories I've ever read on Mibba. Keep writting!January 9th, 2011 at 06:56pm
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:( Gianna! *hugs her*
Gah. That's so saddddd.
>_< I hope they take those douchebags down.December 27th, 2010 at 04:11pm -
Poor Gianna :(
I hate Schlagger so much now xPDecember 27th, 2010 at 02:13am -
Oh my god, no, not Gianna :(
What did Schlagger expect.....that a young girl like Gianna would know anyhting about
What will Melisaa think or do when she finds out that probably the only family left ebside herself is her brother
And who knows how long before Schlagger decides to kill him too because he got fed up with him
Although Zacky is the only lead left to Melissa so he probably wouldn't kill him in the first place
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)December 26th, 2010 at 10:48pm -
Oh my god, they are seriously taking some hard measure to get them out of there
Matt's one brave motherfu****, getting himself beaten to ensure them getting on the plane
I'm just glad that Pierre is alright
Can't wait to see what's going to happen next
Hope you update soon :)November 16th, 2010 at 09:56pm -
Poor Matt! :( He's really brave!
I really loved the chapter, but I do have two minor corrections the word is 'pity' and the phrase is 'catch-22', not 'catch-42'. :)
I loved this update though and keep up the good work!November 16th, 2010 at 12:33am -
You have to be one of the best writers I have come across in such a long time :)
This is such a good story. It has a nice plot and a balance of details and dialogue. I love it so much!! You must update really soon :)October 8th, 2010 at 12:42am -
Seriously Mara needs to shut up before I make her.....wow i'm threatenig a fictional character......
But whatever, I didn't expect that the policeman is Mara's and Penelope's father
I'm rather interested how he managed to get them out of the hospital though
At least Pierre will be with them soon again
And they'll get to Canada soon too
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)September 27th, 2010 at 05:31pm -
CUTEEEEEEE more :)September 25th, 2010 at 10:35pm
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Mara needs to chill on her man hate just a touch.
Either that or she learn to keep her mouth shut 'cause I'm kinda tired of it.
*pets Matt and Jimmy*September 25th, 2010 at 03:34pm -
Whoa......I totally didn't expect her to just faint
But that starnge girl was kinda pissing me off......
With her whole...'but they are men' talk......
If she was really that desperatley waiting for Mel to come and save them from Schlagger, she should really consider hearing what Mel asks (releasing matt and jimm for example)
She could just leave them without helping......she is after all the 'hero'...
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)September 15th, 2010 at 03:28pm -
What happned to meliisssa!!!!September 13th, 2010 at 11:19pm
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Oh. Snap. :OSeptember 13th, 2010 at 08:13pm
I'm kinda epic proud of myself!
*dances* Also, I loved the update!