Breaking Their Hold - Comments

:O I love this!!!! More and awwww Zinas duaghter is gonna get brainwashed :/

:O PIERRE! :(

I hope Jimmy's right. >_<

And that's when there were three left in the group.......
Holy fuck.....how are they able to manage the rest of the way without Pierre by their side?
He was the one, who knows the way alright to Canada.....
But if it's true that he'll be let free again, then he might be able to catch up with the other three again...
I already imagined that they wouldn't come through the city without anything happening....Something was bound to happen
And now they don't have their 'guide' with them anymore
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

At least the guards aren't expecting them to have reached that area right now, which will make it a bit easier to pass the woods
They have at least somehwat of a diguise so they won't get noticed
And then they have to deal with wild animals too
I realy can't wait to see what will happen in the next one
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

O.O this is so frickin instense.
update soon. please!

:D This update? I loved it.

I loved the tension and I'm super excited for more! :)

Holy shit. This story is spectacular.

I'm usually wary of stories revolving around crazy scary governments.

THIS I LOVE THOUGH. <333 So glad I gave it a chance. :)

Ohhh fuckkk nooo, please not Gianna too....
Schlagger's is such a fucking bastard
Hopefully Zacky will be to 'play the ball that's in his court'.....
I still can only hope that Zacky, Brian, Johny and the others get out there soon and alive
At least the others were able to change their appearance
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Oh my god.....that must have been a hard decision for Zacky
Trying to keep his sister safe, but 'sacrifysing' his mom and older sister
Schlagger is a fucking bastard.......I really hope he's get his punishement, when the other four finally make it to Canada
That bastard even want to drag Gianna and Gavin inot all of this.......asshole
I really hope that the other three are okay....
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope youupdate soon :)

Simply amazing. I love it. I love the entire idea. And how it isn't impossible that one day some one like hitler can gain power. Hopefully that never does but how you explor a world that easily can be true is great. And it is so descriptive! This has to be one of the best stories I've read.

oh man...
What's Zacky gonna do??
Loved it.
Update soon!

This is a really interesting plot, and you give excellent details!! Not to be a freak, but in chapter 12, when Pierre held the lighter to his pocketknife, the term is sterilize, not cauterize. >.< Cauterizing is closing the wound or stopping the blood-flow. You said something similar in the beginning of chapter thirteen, but its pretty much what he did, by the way you described it.

Again, sorry for being a freak! =] I've been reading this for the past few days and I'm really into it.. I can't wait for more updates!!

Oh damn, Zacky surely has to a hard decision. If he doesn't cooperate, his sister and mom are killed, but if he does cooperate Mel's captured and Zacky doesn't get anything out of it because Schlagger won't spare hime in any way, He's too much of a bastard to be a man of his words
And they can at least somehow get through everything, but isn't Mstt pretty noticable too. I mean he is buff as fuck. I just hope that the halfway disguise of Jimmy and Mel will work
I'm really looking foward for more
Hope you update soon :)

They are still only in California, that's gonna be fucking long way when they want to get to Canada and now that Mel is injured and they can only travel at night it's gonna take even longer
But they are all pretty determined even more because they now know why Schlagger want to have Mel and they will do everything in their might to save her
Oh no now thay have Maria and Zina
That bastard is trying to get it out from hijm this way, but I assume that he won't give them anything in exchange.
Just don't let Zacky's will break. To much counts on his strong will
I'm really lookign forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

I love this story!! Shlaggers a Nazi douche and Zacky's amazing for dealing with the drugs and electrocutions all for Melissa.
As for Jimmy, No! *slaps hand* Bad! He can't give up now. I hope Melissa's leg is alright, and you better update soon!! <33

Ohhh fu** me sideways that was awesome
God poor Zacky, i feel soo sorry for him. I just hope the others who are still in the hospital will have a chance to get away soon enough. Zacky is soo damn brave standing all that pain
And finally the others who ran away, found each other again. Oh Mel got an infectin in her leg, i'm just glad that it isn't really serious wound
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Ohhh that was, despite the lenght of it, a absoluetly fantastic chapter
Oh nooo Zacky :( He has to somehow get out of there
And M. and P. are in a predicament too. They don't have any food. I hope they can stay strong at least 'til they are out of the cave and find something to eat
It's kind of fu**ed up that these two are happy and content. can't you give your character the same amount of contentness. the others have to suffer but these two.....
but i'm still looking forward for more
hope you update soon :)

this story is so great! I love it! this is the most original story I've ever read like hands down..can't wait for you to update it :D

ohhh that was so aawsome
but i'm asking myself how did they get matt's voice, at the beginnign i thought they caught the other two
and now they are using dogs on the other two but when they found water the water has to come from somewhere and maybe it comes from the waterfall and they will find each other really fast
but i'm fearing for the others (that are still in the hospital), they have to get away as fast as possible even though they planned their escape for a month or so later
i'm really looking forward for more
hope you ipdate soon :)

Le Gasp!! Zacky...... O.o
that chapter was amazing
it's so awesome that zacky has such a strong willpower to save the other three (well four with pierre) but how long will he be able to take everything and what if they question the others and one of them cracks?? please don't let zacky get tortured too long and let mel and the others know he is still alive *i'm begging you, i'm normallynot begging but in this case it's necessary*
i'm really looking forward for more
hope you update soon :)