It Doesn't Matter - Comments

  • AngelicWasteland;

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    I really like the concept behind this, Harry Potter has always been one of my favorite worlds and Ron definitely deserves some love. The first chapter is a great introduction to your character and I really like the way she handles herself, especially with the Slytherins.

    There are a few times, however, where I’ve been pulled from the story and would suggest just proof reading what you’ve written in order to keep the chapters flowing smoothly. I would also suggest breaking up the text, so that it is a little more spaced out.

    Overall, I think this piece is done well and is definitely worth taking time to read.
    April 5th, 2019 at 01:36am
  • LittlexPrincess

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    hoping you continue to update~!
    March 13th, 2019 at 08:22pm
  • LaniLoser

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    @ CorruptedRoyalty
    dont be sorry. i understand. just missing the stories!
    March 6th, 2017 at 06:44pm
  • CorruptedRoyalty

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    @ LaniLoser
    Sorry about that, I just really didn't feel like I could move forward with my two stories without fixing them first.
    February 28th, 2017 at 08:12am
  • LaniLoser

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    disappointed that it wasnt actually a chapter. i got notified of an update =/ sad
    February 27th, 2017 at 06:01pm
  • LaniLoser

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    PROOF READ BUT KEEP WRITING
    July 26th, 2016 at 03:58pm
  • blinkblinklover

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    Please proof read!!!
    August 24th, 2012 at 04:59am
  • europegirl

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    like it so far :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 02:26am