Strawberry Swing - Comments

  • xneverletmegox

    xneverletmegox (105)

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    My god that was lovely but so freaking sad at the same time. I love both Franco brothers and I kno that if James ever does get married I'm gonna be way bummed but happy for him at the same time. :)
    March 25th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • archipelago.

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    i'm in love
    :)
    March 7th, 2010 at 12:43am
  • The Colour of Music

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    Hi
    I'm one of the judges for this contest.

    I really like this. The storyline is really good, and the writing was so heart felt and touching.
    The story flows well and the way you set it out makes it nice to read and look at.

    well done :)
    February 20th, 2010 at 10:26am
  • Emily_Prentiss

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    I liked it. It was very emotional and heart touching. It's just great.
    February 19th, 2010 at 02:27am
  • sobriquet

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    I think you should extend this one-shot into a chapter story, because honestly...I'm in love. You wrote with a lot of emotion, and that's always what I look for in a story. Plus, I can't help but feel attached because I love the Franco brothers. And if you were to consider continuing the story, I have some plot ideas. Anyways, lovely job! You're a great writer!
    February 8th, 2010 at 12:41am
  • little miss perfect;

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    I liked it. It was very well written. A little sad, though. I was kind of pissed that Audrey didn't end up with James because I ADORE him..but Dave is adorable, so its good. I still enjoyed it. By the way, *I get first comment* :)
    February 4th, 2010 at 01:28am