February 16th, 2010 at 06:39pm
This story was making my heart break until the ending.
I love how beautiful this story is.
It makes me, the reader, feel oh so beautiful.
It doesn’t matter what others think.
Everyone is beautiful in their own way.
Few errors.
I like the universal appeal this story has, and your character.
Janice could basically be seen as a part of each and every one of us.
She has a strong personality, and I like how she developed throughout the story.
It was a beautiful, touching story.
Great job.