Don't Speak in Guarantees - Comments

  • Guns and Alex

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    So...This story just made like my entire weekend.
    Its awesome. Update soon!
    October 15th, 2010 at 02:00pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Awwwwwwwwwww, I loved it. I loved the ending it made me chuckle XD hehe I can't wait tillyou post more of the Adam and Raylene spinoff :) I loved this ;) :D :P :) :D :P :) :D :P
    May 11th, 2010 at 04:56am
  • mully17

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    This story just needs a sequel! I need to know how Lucy is and if they stay together
    May 10th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Oh, it's over?! Wasn't expecting that so soon since you're the queen of 30-something chapter stories. Buuut, it was also a breath of fresh air, too. Because while there was drama, there wasn't tons. I love short little stories that end cute and happy and the ending is open and the reader is left to imagine what happens to them, you know? Okay, I'm rambling, but I really really enjoyed this one, Erin! <3
    May 9th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • kati89

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    I liked this story! Can't wait for more of the Burish story updates!
    Hope your finals went well!
    May 9th, 2010 at 07:06pm
  • han_

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    i forgot to say, it was probably a good place to end it.. before Sawyer ran away again, lmao
    May 9th, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • han_

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    aww, it's over?
    i definitely think you could use a sequel(:(:
    May 9th, 2010 at 07:02pm
  • Jessica;

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    Awww, I'm sad it's ending.
    But I think you're right.
    It was a good place to end it.
    <3
    May 9th, 2010 at 05:57pm
  • There She Goes.

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    loved it (:
    i think the ending was just right.
    maybe a short sequel with the same number of chapters as this one?
    May 9th, 2010 at 05:51pm
  • kristinaoshea

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    I loved that story, but I'm in shock, and speechless now....no more SeXXXy Sharp?? =[
    May 9th, 2010 at 05:39pm
  • Renee Says;

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    I loved it!
    It was amazing.
    i'm glad they are together!
    May 9th, 2010 at 03:08pm
  • A1407719

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    I think a short sequel would be great! like one that was around the same length as this story. since the ending was a little abrupt.

    so the adam spin off, that is more then a one shot right? cause you haven't really added to it since the first chapter.
    May 9th, 2010 at 08:27am
  • Kirsten;;

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    I will admit, I never saw the ending happening like that.
    May 9th, 2010 at 07:35am
  • skizzle

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    I loved the way you ended it. I thought it was perfect.
    I really enjoyed reading this! It was awesome =)
    May 9th, 2010 at 06:56am
  • Jessica;

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    Oh good.
    Sharpie taught a 2 year old the word sex.
    Epic.
    Personally, I would prefer you wait until you finish this before posting Adam/Raylene just in case you include Sharpie/Sawyer in there just cause it could get confusing.
    Anyways, more soon. <3
    And good luck on your finals!
    May 5th, 2010 at 12:59am
  • There She Goes.

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    they should be together (:
    bahaha Patrick teaching Lucy bad words. :P
    update soon?

    P.S. you should post Burish. :)
    May 4th, 2010 at 02:46am
  • into.the.rush

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    THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER!
    ps
    post burrrrrrrrr
    nowwwwwwwwww.
    May 4th, 2010 at 02:27am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Yeah, how didn't Lucy pick up that word sooner? Adam Burish is her father, lmao. Sawyer is so wishy-washy. She has no idea how to handle relationships, and I understand that she's never really had one before, but she's still a smart, sensible adult. I don't get how she can be so damn clueless about how to carry herself around Patrick and how to handle with what's going on with them. I want to slap her across the face, hahaha. She's playing with poor Patrick's heart, and that is just NOT cool. :(
    I loved the update. More soon! <3
    May 3rd, 2010 at 08:38pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Ahhh, I love it ;) :):):D:D:D:P:P:P
    May 3rd, 2010 at 09:01am
  • mully17

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    You should so post the story and this one! i love them all
    May 3rd, 2010 at 07:37am