Don't Speak in Guarantees - Comments

"I think the better question is why are you being so difficult? Most girls would love the fact that I want to take them out to dinner instead of just jumping straight to sex." Whoever told him that totally lied. ALL girls would rather just jump straight into bed with him.

"Okay, children," Adam interrupted. "Sharpie, you've got to listen to Raylene. You know she's always right." That boy is whipped =]

Seriously Erin?? Another cliffhanger??? I thought you were trying to break bad habits ;)

Ohh, he has a heart.
I'm glad he turned her down.
Maybe now Sawyer will see he's actually a good guy that isn't only looking for sex.
Raylene is right...he's in love.
Ahhh, hope he's okay though!
More soon. <3

I just started reading this story, and I'm hooked. I like how the sex scenes are placed as a way to show Patrick and Sawyer's relationship, not just for sex's sake. I hope you update soon!

i hope Sharpie's okay.
haha he turned her down.
they got to be in love.
also good luck on your finals. (:

Ahh bad place for a cliff hanger I hope she goes to see if he's ok

yeah a new chapter!
okay so two more weeks until updates are regular again.
can't wait. but I bet sawyer will be right there for him when patrick's hurt.

Love this story. Hope you find a little time to update but good luck with your finals!

sharpie, not man whore?
how wrong.
he must be into herrrr.

ahh!
Sharp better be okay! :(
An what will sawyer do!?
And when will they admit they love eachother?
Because we all know they do! :)

Good luck on the finals and stuff.

Ahhh the wait is going to kill me. But luck with your exams, they're horrible when they come around. I hope you do well. :) Can't wait for your next update.

loved it!!
and you started the story w. burish yay! =)

I'm gonna go cray waiting for the next update!! I loved this one =)

Oh hey, sultry and horny Sawyer! I like that version of her better, not going to lie. Haha. I can't believe Patrick turned her down, and I'm torn. Obviously, I would have loved to read a steamayyy scene, but at the same time I'm so glad he turned her down. Maybe she'll realize that he's not like most men and that he's a good guy! And yeah, WAY TO END IT THERE. You're such a jerk sometimes, Erin. Hahaha. I know how the school thing is; why I haven't updated in a while. Buuut. I just updated Ben and got a new story out, so go me being productive. Haha. Anyway, I digress. I can't wait for more, as always! <3

ahhhhhh!!!!! I love this. :) Aww, Sawyer was at the game!!!!!! How and why though??? Love it ;) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

ahh...so so good! I can't wait for the next update! I sure hope Lucy is alright and that Sawyer can sort herself out...though sharpie could probably do that for her ;) Can't wait!!

love this story!!! can't wait for more!! and yes to adam and raylene!!

love this. <3
such a lucky bitch.

Bahahahah that's totally something I would say!
"your place, right now". Hahahahha
please update soon?!

haha.
she admitted it!
also yes to adam and raylene(:

looved it!!!=) and i would definetly read the spin off about raylene and adam :D