The Warrior - Comments

i love this story!

gosh the blackhawks have traded like half their players haven't they? I am so bummed about it.
anyhoo thanks for the update!!! can't wait for the next one!!!

Awe, Duncan is so sweet.
Dayna is kind of really dramatic.
So, update soon? (:

i like thisss alot! :)

great update (:

Interesting dramafied chapter....but Duncs is still a sweetheart. Can't wait for more!! <33

<33 All cute and whatnot. Also- I KNEW FROM THE START I WOULDN'T LIKE DAYNA.

Hmpf.

this is really good (:

yeah! thank you for updating. I thought this would become an abandoned story.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Irene and Duncan are cute together but I have a feeling it won't last...

GIMME GIMME MORE. <3

awww!
Duncs is soo adorable(:
even without seven of his teeth. :)
cant wait to see what happens.
update soon? (:

Awwww you make me <3 Duncs even more - didn't know that was possible!
I was really waiting for you to bust out the serial killer bit, but the teeth were great too.. tho i kinda wanted him to do the Wiz treatment when he showed her lol. Spose, he's trying to make a good impression though..
Uh oh, what did Brent (it feels so odd to call him that) do to fuck up? Cos you know it's gotta be his fault.
Can't wait for the next one =]

Okay. So since this is a Sebs story, Duncs is obviously going to be knocked out of the competition for Irene. ;( I LOVE THE DUNCS SCENES. Such a sweet heart <3

Ooh interesting chapter! Somehow it doesn't surprise me that Duncan reads, he seems like he's the type to enjoy a good book. I can't wait to see what happens next! <3
PS- GO HAWKSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I WAANNNAAA KNOW HOW THE CONCERT GOES!!! <3

Love this story so far. I'm really interested in what will happen with Brent and Duncan when it comes to Irene

great story!!! can't wait for an update!!

I just found this and love it!
I adore Irene, she just sounds totally awesome.
And they have a date!!!

awww, shes going on a date with duncs.
if you have someone working on a painting in your house, you should probably know her name. just a thought.

Maybe she could see past the hockey player and into the man. Already his music choice impressed her.
Ah, she's seeing past the "hockey player" stereotype that she has stuck in her mind. Duncs was cute but, it does make Brent look like a bit of a jerk for not knowing her name. I know he doesn't see her much or even had a proper conversation but, I'm sure she's been mentioned around him after all she's been working on the mural for a while. He should at least know her name but, I'm glad that Duncs is taking her out, maybe she will open up around him some.
Great update.