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  • mollyb

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    i love this story!
    December 28th, 2010 at 08:40am
  • A1407719

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    gosh the blackhawks have traded like half their players haven't they? I am so bummed about it.
    anyhoo thanks for the update!!! can't wait for the next one!!!
    July 8th, 2010 at 09:18pm
  • There She Goes.

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    Awe, Duncan is so sweet.
    Dayna is kind of really dramatic.
    So, update soon? (:
    July 2nd, 2010 at 06:42pm
  • Jon Toews

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    i like thisss alot! :)
    July 2nd, 2010 at 02:49pm
  • colton orr;

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    great update (:
    July 1st, 2010 at 03:45pm
  • MaliceInWonderland

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    Interesting dramafied chapter....but Duncs is still a sweetheart. Can't wait for more!! <33
    July 1st, 2010 at 10:23am
  • lolgina

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    <33 All cute and whatnot. Also- I KNEW FROM THE START I WOULDN'T LIKE DAYNA.

    Hmpf.
    July 1st, 2010 at 09:48am
  • colton orr;

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    this is really good (:
    June 19th, 2010 at 04:41pm
  • A1407719

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    yeah! thank you for updating. I thought this would become an abandoned story.
    Can't wait for the next chapter! Irene and Duncan are cute together but I have a feeling it won't last...
    June 7th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • lolgina

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    GIMME GIMME MORE. <3
    June 6th, 2010 at 06:50am
  • There She Goes.

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    awww!
    Duncs is soo adorable(:
    even without seven of his teeth. :)
    cant wait to see what happens.
    update soon? (:
    June 6th, 2010 at 01:40am
  • No.Thought.Of.Me

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    Awwww you make me <3 Duncs even more - didn't know that was possible!
    I was really waiting for you to bust out the serial killer bit, but the teeth were great too.. tho i kinda wanted him to do the Wiz treatment when he showed her lol. Spose, he's trying to make a good impression though..
    Uh oh, what did Brent (it feels so odd to call him that) do to fuck up? Cos you know it's gotta be his fault.
    Can't wait for the next one =]
    June 5th, 2010 at 01:17pm
  • ovechkinpwnz

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    Okay. So since this is a Sebs story, Duncs is obviously going to be knocked out of the competition for Irene. ;( I LOVE THE DUNCS SCENES. Such a sweet heart <3
    June 5th, 2010 at 05:37am
  • MaliceInWonderland

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    Ooh interesting chapter! Somehow it doesn't surprise me that Duncan reads, he seems like he's the type to enjoy a good book. I can't wait to see what happens next! <3
    PS- GO HAWKSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 4th, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • emmared FMT!

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    I WAANNNAAA KNOW HOW THE CONCERT GOES!!! <3
    May 25th, 2010 at 09:06pm
  • WildxoxoOne

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    Love this story so far. I'm really interested in what will happen with Brent and Duncan when it comes to Irene
    May 15th, 2010 at 05:58pm
  • AlissaRose89

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    great story!!! can't wait for an update!!
    April 8th, 2010 at 04:25am
  • Kayla Lynn

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    I just found this and love it!
    I adore Irene, she just sounds totally awesome.
    And they have a date!!!
    March 17th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • There She Goes.

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    awww, shes going on a date with duncs.
    if you have someone working on a painting in your house, you should probably know her name. just a thought.
    March 16th, 2010 at 12:40am
  • Taylor;

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    Maybe she could see past the hockey player and into the man. Already his music choice impressed her.
    Ah, she's seeing past the "hockey player" stereotype that she has stuck in her mind. Duncs was cute but, it does make Brent look like a bit of a jerk for not knowing her name. I know he doesn't see her much or even had a proper conversation but, I'm sure she's been mentioned around him after all she's been working on the mural for a while. He should at least know her name but, I'm glad that Duncs is taking her out, maybe she will open up around him some.
    Great update.
    March 15th, 2010 at 10:48pm