Thrills To Spare - Comments

  • Chickydee6

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    Yay more babies! Twins, definately twins to make it an even total :P
    I loved the update. I'm really sad about Marc though. My heart goes out to him.
    And, why can't Jared get any love? I never see Jared with a girl haha.
    More please!!
    March 11th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • mully17

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    Omg how are they going to have just one I say make it septuplets!!!! Haha

    And ill take marc off karas hands!!!
    March 11th, 2010 at 03:28am
  • Kirsten;;

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    “But… but you said!” His voice cracked as his chest dropped.
    This made me giggle, he's such a little kid with the one track mind.
    Phone sex.” He immediately replied. “No.” She shook her head. “Fine, Skype sex.” He insisted. Phoebe exhaled loudly before finally agreeing. “Fine, but not every time you’re away.” She narrowed her eyes. “And back rubs.” He demanded pathetically. “Lots of ‘em.” He added. “Yeah, I can do that.” She nodded.
    Oh Jordan, this totally seems like something he would do. I liked the update. Amazing. Can't wait for more.
    March 10th, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • Jon Toews

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    ok easily my favorite chapter. It was so funny! I love how Jordan is so persistent! And yay another baby! But im proud that Phoebe stood her ground for a while :)

    More soon? :]
    March 10th, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • sweeterthansweettea

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    a burnette staal. not sure if its possible =) haha
    I love the family aspect of it all.
    can't wait for more!
    March 10th, 2010 at 10:28pm
  • Lady Looch

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    “I don’t know if I’ll ever get used to a brunette Staal.” She joked, taking a seat on the couch beside the loveseat.

    “I’m hoping it’ll lighten up over time.” Eric winked with a laugh

    nope. he's gonna stay brunette eric. do not get your hopes up

    She giggled, raising the treat to Jordan’s lips, laughing wildly as he pretended to nibble it up before digging his fingers into her sides gently.
    um.. hellooo! adorable!

    “So Pheeb, when are you popping out the next one?” Eric asked with a grin, sending his brother a secret wink, seeing as they had a long phone conversation earlier that week about Jordan’s attempts to talk Phoebe into having another Staal.
    ohh look at those staal's being sneaky ;D

    “I’m keeping this one.” Jared announced as he entered the family room, shirtless and clad in a pair of sleep pants as Dylan
    SO CUTE!!! hahahahah. but jared.. idk if you could handle it.

    “Mm bonfire. That means alcohol.” Brianna smiled wistfully. She hadn’t a drop to drink during her pregnancy or the last five months during her breastfeeding, but now that they had weaned Chase onto formula and bottles, she was ready to let a little loose.
    blame it on the goose, thats got you feeling loose. and seriously.. why am I always the alcoholic in the story..! gosh!

    “Are you trying to get me drunk?” She giggled
    get her drunk and pregnant.. bahaha im totally team jordan on this issue. MORE STAAL BABIES!

    “Phoebe, give me one more, one more.” He pleaded, sitting up again, kneeing over her. “Please baby.” He kissed up and down the soft curve of her cheek. “One more and I’ll never ask again.” He insisted.
    TAKE IT! TAKE IT! TAKE IT! YEP! TAKE IT!

    “Nothing, nothing gives me more pride than to have you bearing my children, Phoebe. No trophies, no medals, and certainly no Cup.”
    ummm crazy sweet! he could talk me into having kids with him ANYDAY.

    “One.” She insisted.
    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YES! YES! YES! YES!
    I am sooo happpyyy.
    good. im glad she gave into him because they need to populate the world with their adorable kids. and seriously, how precious. Idk if i want a girl of a boy! but how cute!
    seriously.
    and that chase kid.. what a cutie. then again he has hot parents so...
    loved this. I love the staal family together. for sure for sure.
    and I want more family action.
    and marc. stop being a pussy and move on with your life!
    huff!
    more soon?? okay!
    <33
    March 10th, 2010 at 10:27pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    They are too cute
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    March 10th, 2010 at 10:15pm
  • musiclovr101

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    another Staal baby!! woot woot!!! i'm excited!! i hope marc is okay.... and i cant see ANY staals having dark hair it just throws off the Ginger Family Tree.... I reallly liked the update. and jordan needs to keep it in his pants when there are parents next door... ahahha
    Can't wait for more keep it up
    March 10th, 2010 at 08:59pm
  • MissLis

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    somehow the whole idea of jordan begging for another baby spooks me
    it's just... I dunno... aren't guys usually the apprehensive ones? and the girls pushing for babies?
    but it's uber cute so keep it up! :)
    March 10th, 2010 at 06:49pm
  • Falling.Over.Me

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    i love this story! i've mostly read stories that start from before marriage or before any of the characters have met but i love idea of the a story after marrriage. update soon please!
    March 7th, 2010 at 04:11am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    You are seriously my favorite writer on here.
    Your stories are so amazing.
    : D
    March 6th, 2010 at 02:30am
  • Renee Says;

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    amazing! :)
    They should have a baby..again. :)
    March 6th, 2010 at 01:45am
  • Jessica;

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    Oh goodness.
    Jordan & Siddo at the grocery store together was hilarious.
    Especially when that women thought they were a couple.
    I was crying from laughing so hard.
    The end was cute, too.
    More soon. <3
    March 5th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • sweeterthansweettea

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    "Sidney shrugged and figured this was better than getting knocked right in his nuggets."
    hahaha!

    "“Well he’s adorable, and you two are such a handsome couple.” She complimented before walking away, pushing her own car as well."
    hahahah! they would make a handsome couple ;-) lol jk.

    I loved this.
    Jordan and Phoebe are so sweet =)
    and Jordan is adorable with Dylan.
    update again soon, please !
    March 5th, 2010 at 06:37pm
  • Jon Toews

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    Haha yes you are an updating Machine!

    oh my gosh poor Jordan! almost had a heart attack! I cant imagine if Phoebe found out!
    And awee their relationship is so cute! and i hope that Sid and Kara have babies too :)
    March 5th, 2010 at 05:52pm
  • PensRock

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    Jordan volunteered to take his main man along and since Sidney was in the neighborhood anyways visiting Kara, he got dragged along to the store as well. - - Oh dear God, please tell me what grocery store they shop at. I so want to run into these three when I'm grocery shopping. I am going to start wearing make-up to the grocery store. LoL (what? you never know.)

    “I don’t know… I don’t question things, I just obey diligently.” Jordan replied, - - Seriously? He is the perfect man!!!

    you two are such a handsome couple - - ROFL :D

    I mean, being a bachelor was fun while it lasted, but nothing compares to this, coming home to a family who loves you and wants you there. The worst part of being single with this lifestyle was realizing how alone you were all the time. - - awww. just awww

    Once I laid eyes on those hips, I thought ‘yep, she’s the one’.” watch it Jordan. LOL - had to get that in there huh. So funny

    “Well, maybe I’ll stop letting you kiss my chin.” - - now that's just mean. Oh, chin moments. LOVE chin moments and the thing about the stubble? Yeah, you hit the nail right on the head with that one.

    Thanks for the quick update. :D LOVE IT.
    March 5th, 2010 at 12:49pm
  • Rylie_

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    I liked it!

    When Jordan lost Dylan, hat scared scared me. I thought some jerk was gonna take him. I laughed so hard when that lady said Jor and Sid made a good couple.

    You're an updating beast!! Can't wait for more :)
    March 5th, 2010 at 12:44pm
  • Taylor;

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    It's almost like every time this story gets updated I get a new favorite chapter. I seriously loved all the humor in this chapter, makes me feel better about the drama involving Marc in the last chapter and flattening Sid.
    I know I've mentioned this before but Dylan is precious, he's going to be a little heartbreaker. It's funny that with all the details you give I can literally picture the grocery store scene happening. Dylan reaching for and eating things that he shouldn't and Jordan buying five types of milk because it's on the grocery list. Jordan's been taught well, don't question things that your wife wants.

    The 'cheerios or charms' part made me think of my little cousin that always responds "yes" when we're at a restaurant and they ask for "soup or salad" in his defense it does sound like super salad. But, the point I was trying to make was the characters are so realistic and I can picture them as being real people. I can picture Dylan and baby girl Staal.
    I almost expected the cute couple thing being mentioned since it's a bunch of guys, grocery shopping. But, leave it to Jordan to tell Sid he's the woman in the relationship and Jordan's the ten. Jordan getting worked up about loosing Dylan did get me worked up, it's that whole guy holding a baby thing. I love how you do show Jordan's feelings about when he was a bachelor and how happy being with his family really makes him. He's a family guy and clearly loves being a good father and husband.

    They do need to have more babies. Phoebe can use the logic that they've already had a baby of each gender but, really if you're making gorgeous kids don't stop at two. Jordan should be good at persuading her into more kids, or maybe grandma Staal can demand more babies. Grandma's have a lot of influence on how many grandbabies they want.

    Loved the update. The humor in this one really is a good contrast to the chapter before it and it does show us more of Jordan's relationship with Phoebe.
    You've been awesome with updates. Would it be too much to ask for more before the end of the weekend? Please.
    March 5th, 2010 at 12:15pm
  • wasted youth

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    Kara, you are an updating machine. I enjoy it!
    Love this story (:
    xo
    March 5th, 2010 at 08:43am
  • Kirsten;;

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    Aw, Jord and Sidney made me giggle so much. I can't believe it. Jordan with Dylan was cute too, I loved it. And, if I must say so, Jordan is a horn dog. Keep it in his pants, but not really.
    March 5th, 2010 at 07:12am