Balancing The Books - Comments

  • stallion ducky;

    stallion ducky; (100)

    United States
    So, I know that this is my bad, because I didn't put it in the rules. But you don't have a link back to the contest in the summary. D:

    All in all, I thought it was pretty creative. It wasn't the usual thing to read, which was a nice refresh for me. I liked it. (:
    The only thing you may need to work on, I think, would be endings. It seemed like it may have been a little rushed in the last two or three paragraphs. But other than that, it was a cute little story to read.

    Good luck in my contest! (:
    February 13th, 2010 at 05:37pm