Sinful Desires - Comments

Yet another one that I can't believe is over.

It's just not faiiiiiiiiir.

I loved this one.

As for that bet I just lost... I am SO glad there are limits to what it can be, and that he can't do anything too taxing or everyone will be bitching at him for picking on his super preggers wife.

*Grins*

You know its true.

And I stand by the fact that Jimmy totally deserved to get punched in the gut for telling me to shut up. Who the fuck does he think he was talking to? I mean, really? He should fucking know better than that shit. Especially when they were all on our asses about letting them know as soon as we knew just to turn their phones off? Bullshit.

I am happy for Bri and Violet though.

*Giggles*

He owes me.

He owes me SO big.

I mean, I went and faced cranky Haner parents to tell them that they needed to chill out and give Vi a chance before labeling her a gold digger because she got knocked up by accident.

Shit happens.

Besides, I've been around the longest out of any of the girls, pretty sure I can sniff out the gold-diggers like a blood hound at this point and if I like her, they should know she's cool.

*Grins*

Anyways... I want to sequel.

Soon.

I miss this one alreadyy.

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Ive just read this in like, three days and it was amazing. Could you let me know the title of the sequel so I can subscribe please?

Matt's bitchy ex girlfriend better watch the fuck out.

I ain't gonna be pregnant forever.

What? I'm just saying...

I mean, seriously to blatantly come onto a guy in front of his very noticeably knocked up wife, you have an ass kicking coming your way.

It's just a given.

For the time being, however, I will settle for knowing I will never have to see her face in Vi's bakery again.

Speaking of, her dad is a dick... she needs a new one. And a new brother... I shall share mine since she is my cupcake hook up and helps me get revenge on Bri when he's a dick and says really stupid shit.

Haha... I love how Matt was smart enough not to mention how there was really no room for Violet to sit on mine and his side of the booth... just moved over as far as possible and kept his mouth shut.

Very, very smart of him.

Then again, as ridiculously terrible as things have been going for me with my stupid sister showing up and then his stupid ex-girlfriend making an appearance, the only way he better act towards me is obnoxiously sweet.

Otherwise... pretty sure he'd get his ass kicked by quite a few people.

But yeah...

Update this...

Soon.

I miss regular updates on it.

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Soo yeahh.

I maintain, that extra sibling that decided to rear her ugly head again, really needs to go. Like Now.

Scratch that.

She needed to go before she ever turned back up.

Thank god Matt is the one being calm and collected about all of it, because I sure as fuck am not. So yeah, like I said, good for him and Jimmy too now that I think about it.

Also, the stuff between Bri and Violet (the fluffy stuff) was pretty adorable.

Update it.

Soon.

I want more....

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uh-oh!!!!! love this!!!!

Hahahaa, I couldn't help but laugh because of how true it is that if Jes didn't like someone, they would be FULLY aware. xD
Love it, babe! :D

Yeahh...

That sister, and I use the term in a very loose sense of the word, has got to go.

What the fuck did she think she was doing, showing up at my house and fucking letting herself in after I told her there was no fucking way she was staying with me, or within a 5 mile radius of my house.

And My parents?

You can bet your ass they are going to hear all about it when I finally talk to them. I mean, why the fuck would they be crazy enough to think that I would let that bitch stay with me when she tried to sleep with the man that is now my husband, when we were together!

there's no fucking way!

The stuff between Violet and Brian was cute though. I feel bad for them, they really don't have any support from their parents right now, and it sucks.

Brian's right though... If I didn't like Vi, she would know it.

So yeah...

Update it.

Soon.

I wanna know what happens next!

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Ughhh.

Why do I have such a shitty sister in this one?

And better yet, what in the holy fuck made her think calling me for a place to stay was a good idea after she tried hard to not only break me and Matt up, but to fucking sleep with him on top of that?

Clearly she was fucking higher than the Empire State building.

I mean, Jeeeeesus.

Matt made me go 'awww' though. I mean, he was just so overprotective and adorable, and just yeahh. Lol.

I did love it though, even if my shitty sister decided to make an appearance.

For the record though... she better not show up at my house because they're is sure to be a big, UGLY scene if she does.

The only real question there is, who will be the one making it.

Really though, update this sooooon!

I wanna know what happens next!

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Pure amazingness!!!!!

Those poor guys aren't gonna know what the fuck hit them.

That's all I have to say about this one.

Well, that and Michelle better hope I never catch her alone in a dark alleyway, but that one's kinda a given after what she said.

Seriously though... I did love this one. I laughed at Brian a lot. Especially when the one girl puked all over his truck. Mostly because I stand by the statement that he totally deserved that shit after telling his entire fucking family he fathered my unborn child.

Now to see what kind of chaos ensues when four grown men are left alone with four extremely hyper little girls, and one sick on.

Absolutely no good can come of it, of that I'm suree.

Update.

Sooooon.

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oh my god I can't wait to read what happens next and see if the guys get out of this alive :p

and Michelle so deserved to get smacked in the face! :-)

Please update soon!!!!

I would've done the same thing to Brian nd Michelle

Yeahhh.

Brian is sooo totally fucked.

I love it!

As for Michelle?

That fucking bitch better watch it. Not only am I a redhead, but I'm Jimmy's baby sister in this one. That does not fucking bode well for her. Not. At. Fucking. All.

She totally deserved to get punched dead in the fucking face for saying what she did, though. I just wish those cops would have waited until after Vi and I smashed her face in to come in to the bakery. Would have made out lives sooooo much easier.

.......

Oh.

My...

GOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!

First of fucking all, I wanna know where that bitch is so I can finish her off... who the fuck does she think she is? She has no fucking business calling Matt...

Second of all...

YOU JUST FUCKING LEFT IT THERE? WHAT THE FLYING FUCK?

UPDATE IT.

NOW.

RIGHT.

FUCKING.

NOW.

I AM SO UNAMUSED WITH THIS ENDING.

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I'm loving this story so far!

Oh.

Sweeeeeeeet.

Goddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.

Brian has no idea what he's in for.

None.

He is soooo totally fucked and he doesn't even fucking have a clueeeee.

God, it's going to be a-fucking-mazingggg.

I can't wait for you to post it.

It's going to be beautifull....

Update it.

Nowwww.

Loll.

Okay... I'll give you some time, but I do want it sooooooon.

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Next chapter is going to be really good!!

Well...

Brian's parents?

Clearly they're pissed off. I mean, seriously... did they have to be so terrible about it. Don't get me wrong. I understand they're angry... they sorta have a reason to.

That doesn't mean that I think they should have treated Violet that way. They definitely shouldn't have. But I do understand them being upset.

I also think Brian should have stuck it out at McKenna's party... sure he's pissed at his parents... but that is his baby sister and its better he suffer through a fucking party than disappoint her and make her feel crappy for something that isn't even her fault.

Sooo... Violet's rich.

Who knew?

Clearly only her grandmother, loll.

But yeahh... Update it.

SOOOOOOON.

I want moreeeeeeeee.

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Soo...

Really... I don't think I have to tell you how much I fuckin' loved this one.

Especially the end.

I laughed sooo fucking hard, even though I already knew it was gonna happen. Mostly because that is exactly what Brian fucking deserved after that stupid fucking stunt he decided to pull.

I do sorta feel bad fer Violet... only a little though, since she did help Brian out some when he decided to be a fucking idiot and tell his family he was the father of my one baby.

Now they're getting two of their ownnn... hehehehe.

I can't wait 'til they tell Papa Gates... it's going to be fabulous. I want to be there when it happens... so I can just sit back with a bowl of popcorn in my lap and watch the show. It'll be spectacular.

*grins*

So yeahh.

Update it.

Soon, because I want that to happen.

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Okay...

So I'll concede... this really wasn't that bad. Matt wasn't so crabby and pissed off, just a little upset... which he had every right to be.

But holy godd that moment between Matt and I, where I admit crushing on him from the age of fifteen? That was so fuckin' fluff-tastic I thought the clouds might just spontaneously turn into cotton candy and start raining down gummy bears and peanut butter cups.

Alas, that did, in fact, not happen. Rather unfortunate but not unexpected.

Oh and also? Brent's crazy girlfriend being nice? It kinda threw me wayyy off. Lol.

Awwww Zack is all relieved about Matt not wanting to kill him dead. Can't totally blame him there.

I'm totally with Leana though... what is his and Jimmy's deal? They need to kiss and make-up, seriously. Jimmy knows he was a douche, he's said he's sorry, Zack is still allowed to be a little pissy because he's in pain but he does need to forgive Jimmy already.

Besides... he totally needs to consider how he'd have reacted if it were his baby sister that was involved. My bet? Something at least a little similar.

But yeahh...

Like I said... this one was a complete and total pleasant surprise.

I can't wait for the next one.

Update it. Soon!

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